Plain, honest feedback
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Plain, honest feedback....
The voice is good. There is a bit of a monotone though, sometimes people do that on purpose. But I would like to hear that same voice with more emotion. WIthout it, the voice sounds kind of like Paris, a conscious rapper-type.I am not sure that's the style you want. Or is it? The clincher is the music. Your voice is better than the music. Is that a concern, or was this just some sound to practice to. The music sounds arabic. Credit goes to you for it being different, but I am not sure it compliments your voice the way you want it to. Again, the arabic sound and the Paris voice make it sound like conscious-rap. Nothing wring with that, but that's what I get from it.
Also, it is a very smooth lyrical delivery. Smoothness implies either greatness (and confidence) or mediocrity. The smoothness must be accompanied by a voice that is either authoritative, pimpish, or clowning. Just my opinion, but other than those three things, smoothness makes a voice easily slip into a bag with a millionother rappers. No distinction (I'm thinking about marketing a voice). That same voice in hte song, wth a little more high and low....start and stop...emphasis... SOMETHING would be a winner. The voice, the sound is VERY good. You just gotta make it stand out from the crowd. The music can help more, you shouldn't be having to carry the music with your voice. But more than the music, you just have to sound like it's important that we hear this shit.... too much smoothness and you end up sounding like Special Ed. (I got it made).
Good luck with your ambitions, homie
[email protected]
http://www.papertrailmusic.com
The voice is good. There is a bit of a monotone though, sometimes people do that on purpose. But I would like to hear that same voice with more emotion. WIthout it, the voice sounds kind of like Paris, a conscious rapper-type.I am not sure that's the style you want. Or is it? The clincher is the music. Your voice is better than the music. Is that a concern, or was this just some sound to practice to. The music sounds arabic. Credit goes to you for it being different, but I am not sure it compliments your voice the way you want it to. Again, the arabic sound and the Paris voice make it sound like conscious-rap. Nothing wring with that, but that's what I get from it.
Also, it is a very smooth lyrical delivery. Smoothness implies either greatness (and confidence) or mediocrity. The smoothness must be accompanied by a voice that is either authoritative, pimpish, or clowning. Just my opinion, but other than those three things, smoothness makes a voice easily slip into a bag with a millionother rappers. No distinction (I'm thinking about marketing a voice). That same voice in hte song, wth a little more high and low....start and stop...emphasis... SOMETHING would be a winner. The voice, the sound is VERY good. You just gotta make it stand out from the crowd. The music can help more, you shouldn't be having to carry the music with your voice. But more than the music, you just have to sound like it's important that we hear this shit.... too much smoothness and you end up sounding like Special Ed. (I got it made).
Good luck with your ambitions, homie
[email protected]
http://www.papertrailmusic.com
Great feedback
wow, Game warden, you are my man for feedback....you really analyzed the piece. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and provide me with your honest opinion. Look forward to more music in the near future. I will be sure to email you when i update the song listing.
thanks again...
Bleezal
wow, Game warden, you are my man for feedback....you really analyzed the piece. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and provide me with your honest opinion. Look forward to more music in the near future. I will be sure to email you when i update the song listing.
thanks again...
Bleezal
