I like the first one but I think you should take off the P.A. tag. Also, on the text...pick a font you like, don't add any bevel or anything else to it just leave it plain white, make the size around 30, lower the opacity of it to around 60% and put it where you have the P.A. tag right now. Just try it and see how it looks cause the text you have now isn't that great.