need feedback.

[Upheaval]

The Shiyning. first draft. incomplete.
let me know what ya think.

 

[TONY206]

the text definitely shines, the pic of the dude on the left looks
wierd (the color) so does the other dudes face i like the background
i dont like the way shining is spelled but thats prolly how they
want it

 

[TONY206]

the text definitely shines, the pic of the dude on the left looks
wierd (the color) so does the other dudes face i like the background
i dont like the way shining is spelled but thats prolly how they
want it

 

[TONY206]

the text definitely shines, the pic of the dude on the left looks
wierd (the color) so does the other dudes face i like the background
i dont like the way shining is spelled but thats prolly how they
want it

 

[TONY206]

the text definitely shines, the pic of the dude on the left looks
wierd (the color) so does the other dudes face, i like the background
i dont like the way shining is spelled but thats prolly how they
want it

 

[TONY206]

lol it posted 4 times

 

[Juan Million]

I dunno about that guy rockin a T9 beanie.

 

[TONY206]

good eye i didnt notice that

 

[Upheaval]

they are going on tour with tech9 in may. they were both sportin t9 shit. thats what they wanted.

they wanted "SURREAL". i looked it up, and this is what i came with. got any ideas?

 

[SikIndividuoh]

It doesn't really strike me as surreal in all honesty. When I think of surreal I think of "dream-like, hypnotic, tweaked-out" something in that realm of vision. Not that the design is not visually pleasing, just not "surreal".

The human on the left is a bit burned out as previously mentioned. Take some pics from inside of a Fun House or something, lol...seriously. Regardless, it is still a nice design, the text at the top is eye-catching.

Regards

 

[SPORADIC]

Like Forestated,The text at the top is eye-catching..Though,I notice their names not on the CD.Maybe you're gonna add it later....But,I like how they got a glistening of their arms & clother and if a water reflection was shining on them..I think you've doen a great job Upheav.....
You've been getting a lot of work coming your way...Keep that hustle going on bro.....Respect...

 

[KODOGG]

I lyke da' text alot.. 'n it sorta strikes me as a Futuristic backround.. If thatz what "Surreal" meanz.. But yeah add their Artist namez on there..

 

[kulif]

im feeling that, the tones are nice n warmthe guy on the rights expression looks a bit in between of a smile and frown though
nice work still


pz..

 

[x-kalibur]

shits pretty coo homie..

 

[Upheaval]

thanks for all the feedback.

@sik- surreal was defined as "dreamlike, nightmarish, questionable reality". I tried to create a ghost effect over their bodies and in the background. but i feel ya on the left guy, i need to put some work into that, hes way too dark, i might try another pic.

peace...

 

[SikIndividuoh]

Upheaval -

I expect nothing less than a solid, well-thought out design upon finalizing it...make it happen broham.

Regards

 

[EvilWayz]

well first off, i think that the white guy looks too bright and the black guy looks too dark.........the text is hella nice...........

 

[jayo]

Its dope.. Theres too much shadows or something on the two guys

 

[-KaLil3ul2-]

i think it's tight.....but yeah, I'm too light, he's too dark...n hell yeah we supportin tech on our cover

 

[306]

dude on the left seems to dark comapred to the guy on the right. Tight shit though