my angels my demons and i..feedback..

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Jul 19, 2005
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my angels my demons and i
together we ride together we'll alwaze be high
my angels my demons and i
together we glide and together we'll die

ANGELS:

i stand posted on a pedastool above likwids left shoulder
trying to redirect the swaying of sicc thoughts away fromthe souljah
observed him getting crushed from bolders, and resurrect
knowin theres no explaination behind his cloudy visions of death
god and myself have tried our hardest, but reguardless
likwid eyece is heartless and remain the same old breathing carcass
once he indulged in the devils harvest, i admit it was a bad decision
served himself with a life sentence in a scorching purgatory prision
kritikal mistakes of killing villains and innocent children
paused his ticket through the pearly gates, i dont think he will be forgiven
i've discussed a reimbursment for this demented indiviual likwid
but was denied, due to deadly lyrics and bloody hyeroglyphics

DEMONS:

i've manipulated his mind, implanted murders design
into eyeces hardrive and erased the love for mankind
replaced with hatred greed and an unsatisfying hunger for weed
and a hunger to want anyone who breathes to internally bleed
eternally i know he will suffer burning in my leaders lakes
with a lifetime incarcerated begin penetrated with wooden stakes
the stake were high and so am i as i lean on the right shoulder blade
encouraging him to walkinto central station and pull pins from grenades
serenade caskets of fake bastards, devower any coward
form a deadly alliance like goegre bush and john howard
foever he'll be doing the devils work displaying likwid power
from the darkness of the tower, corpses throw yo hands up and raise yo flowers

I:

im likwid a suicidal lyricist about to blow the fuck up
selecting butcher knives to let all three of our veins erupt
the most kurupt character known to surface
releasing magnificent flows as often coffins go in and out of hearses
blessed and cursed with a demon and angel as sidekicks
but they only add to the destruction i bring and destroy my consciene
i would have only wanted to knock emcees unconcious
thought that was nonsense cos the victims laid with vital organs punctured
i can no longer deal with voices whispering, vibrating eardrums
reach deep into the angel belly button grippin tight to his lungs
tear them out with an incredible force, snapped wings and halos
viciously saw off limbs, god will recieve the package of the torso
show no remorse, thedevils false shred your demons pulse
launch him towards your domain from this rocket launcher i hold
as for myself, i said together we'll ride and die
plummeted from my bedroom window on to a bed of nails where i lie.......
 
Sep 13, 2004
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this is tight but yur shit always ha the same vibe to it, that crazy shit that sounds like a skitso wrote it, that isnt bad, its tight, but try to change it up, talk about some real life shit and things like that, you got sumthin on yur mind just flow about it, i know this type of shit cant ALWAYS be on yur mind.
 
Jul 19, 2005
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this is tight but yur shit always ha the same vibe to it, that crazy shit that sounds like a skitso wrote it, that isnt bad, its tight, but try to change it up, talk about some real life shit and things like that, you got sumthin on yur mind just flow about it, i know this type of shit cant ALWAYS be on yur mind.
i know what ya mean homies... but the thing is i am skitzo... and mentally ill if thats what people call it... and shit is alwaze on my mind... i spit bout real shit i juss put it in a way i would like to hear it if someone else spat that shit... i aint into rappin about the good things in life and shit cos that shit dont really exsist in mine... so i stay infected and sicc... its not normal for me to have no one get mutilated in a spit... thanks for all the feedback homies good lookin...1
 

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Damn, you're definately on a different tip right there. When I was reading it, I was imagining three different voices. Like a godly voice, a demon voice, and then the voice of some normal dude. But I was actually gettin into it. That shit would be good to a beat.

Creative.

Keep it up.
 
Sep 13, 2004
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Likwid Eyece said:
i know what ya mean homies... but the thing is i am skitzo... and mentally ill if thats what people call it... and shit is alwaze on my mind... i spit bout real shit i juss put it in a way i would like to hear it if someone else spat that shit... i aint into rappin about the good things in life and shit cos that shit dont really exsist in mine... so i stay infected and sicc... its not normal for me to have no one get mutilated in a spit... thanks for all the feedback homies good lookin...1
oh fa real? thats nuts fool, i wasnt talkin bout like happy and what not, i just meant like, less mutilation, and more emotion, its hard to explain, but if that aint how you get down, that aint how you get down, do ya thang the way you know how, good shit man.
peace