Mistah F.A.B. Design

[BayBoss420]

feedback is appreciated

edit: this isnt supposed to be sumtin flashy, or obviousley made in photoshop. I was going for simple if that helps. i already kno most dudes on here wont feel it cuz its not hella busy, bright, photoshop obvious..but if u like Simple stuff lemme get sum feedback!

 

[I AM]

what is this supposed to be? just a picture for your own personal amusement or an album cover or what?

 

[BayBoss420]

i started out makin a cd cover but it really could be anything, just a picture for a background, a sig, a miniposter

 

[Superfly Snuka]

ummmmm ok

 

[Likwid]

I don't know what kind of feedback is needed. It's a picture with text.

 

[BayBoss420]

^^composition, colors, balance, strength, typography etc...

 

[Superfly Snuka]

^^composition, colors, balance, strength, typography etc...

typography is bad, you didnt kern your shit. a huge gab between the F.a


AND the top text is flush right, but the bottom is centered? no its off center...slightly right

 

[BayBoss420]

^^thanks for tha feedback. agreed....hah I did kern it then i retyped it later and forgot to. that F.A.B. looks fucked up

 

[Superfly Snuka]

shoulda made the color strip all the way down on the left to cover all that dead black space, then switch the font up to something tighter

 

[BayBoss420]

heres an update wit sum of ur suggestions that i liked

 

[Kayne]

typography is bad, you didnt kern your shit. a huge gab between the F.a


AND the top text is flush right, but the bottom is centered? no its off center...slightly right

yea the text place is off, dont look good. i would probaly make one to the left the other right align. other then that is clean not much really to say

 

[BayBoss420]

Here's the final..I fixed sum of tha shit u all pointed out. Im happy wit it now

 

[Defy]

I like the color scheme.....but thats about it.....I don't like the font....I don't like the gap underneath fabs bottomless torso.....I don't like the random ass darkened yellow stripe.....but yeah, I do like how the colors match his shirt :ermm:

 

[Gordon Gekko]

Throw ya lighters up!!!!

 

[BayBoss420]

I like the color scheme.....but thats about it.....I don't like the font....I don't like the gap underneath fabs bottomless torso.....I don't like the random ass darkened yellow stripe.....but yeah, I do like how the colors match his shirt :ermm:

thanks for tha feedback. What you mean by random ass yellow stripe tho? theres 2 other ones, they all the color of his shirt...

 

[Likwid]

Throw ya lighters up!!!!

lmfao

 

[Defy]

thanks for tha feedback. What you mean by random ass yellow stripe tho? theres 2 other ones, they all the color of his shirt...

oh yeah....now I notice it.....it was just that the shit was darkened so I didn't see the other colors, it looked like you had a block of 3 colors on top & bottom with a random ass yellow stripe connecting it.....I see what it is now....I still don't like it tho....

 

[BayBoss420]

^^haha aright

 

[Superfly Snuka]

shoulda kept it a solid stripe all the way down...

 

[BayBoss420]

^^ i tried that cuz i thought that might work too but it looked hella weird with it either cutting his arm off or him ontop of it