Local NorthWest Rapper Needs Support

[jacksonvilleguy]

Hey guys. I just wanted any positive input, and info on things i can do to improve production etc...I'm still kind of new to prouction and could use comments and any fans. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lnQK5LE0GfQ

 

[inasense206]

take the flange off your voice.. youre from florida right? that sounds like some early 2000 hyphy shit... more emotion in your voice... basically.. the beat is OK but repetitive