lil LUCKY LATIN RAPPER
- Thread starter Lucky_210
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you tend to rap like your reading the lyrics off the paper....at least on this song...it doesnt sound natural and a lot of your wordplay is below average and simple...you should try and write something a little bit more complex instead of the same old...."slanging thangs, banging 'caine, niggas know my name cause i slang these thangs, in the game, getting change, all my niggas feell me main"
those type raps are very simple and easy to write...THIS IS THE BAY...if your lyrics aint up to par you arent going to make it....
For someone claiming to be the best new "meskin" rapper, i can name 10 latins rappers that would blow you out the water.
its all good to be proud of your work, but when you start claimin to be the best and you sound like you started rappin in January homie, that shit dont fly
those type raps are very simple and easy to write...THIS IS THE BAY...if your lyrics aint up to par you arent going to make it....
For someone claiming to be the best new "meskin" rapper, i can name 10 latins rappers that would blow you out the water.
its all good to be proud of your work, but when you start claimin to be the best and you sound like you started rappin in January homie, that shit dont fly
FUK U BEEZY U JUS TALKIN DOWN ON YO RAZA STUPID ASS SQUARE #SLAPYOSELF THIZZ LATIN NEW AGE http://soundcloud.com/lil_lucky210/dj-khale-im-on-one-remix
