.:KnOwLeDgE:.

[Mc LoUiE]

I flow to educate minds of wisdom they'll never find with greed/
Lessons of inner peace and harmony so take heed/
To my words, they'll enligthen the darkness in your heart/
Rushing with a verbal attack, tearing you apart/
It's simple, I lead the way and you slowly follow/
You need to search yourself and find that your soul is hollow/
You live with a mist filled confused mind fallacies surronding you/
Stop and question yourself now and then why you do what you do/
Independent thoughts must overcome book smarts/
The youth must realize the truth and drive it into the weak of heart/
There's more to the reality than the surface of what you see/
One must search with in the spirit and realize inside what it be/
Wisdom can't be handed to you or taught by instructions/
One must overcome the lies and create their own functions/
If we can spread these ideas all across the globe/
People will live honestly in their own homes/

now...My words impact your chest like double desert eagles
Crackin' down your bones makin' your soul feel feeble
I'm the one you love to copy and imitate
Cause my ways is beautiful when I elucidate

 

[Mc LoUiE]

feedback

 

[Bone]

Nice piece of "art"

 

[Mc LoUiE]

thnx bone can i get some more feedback..

if you peep this and dont reply fuck you then...

 

[CURT B]

cool shit but the first couple lines are weak compaired to the rest of ur lines.jus add rhymes with in the first couple lines and then it will be knockin.

-one

 

[Mc LoUiE]

ight thnx for the feedback fuck the rest who peeped and didnt reply....

 

[Mr.521]

tight

i like that type shit... you can see the power in tha art....
stay up and keep it commin foe 2003. 521 Alwayz

 

[killapsmkinable]

you tried to come to deep at first but it comes the best on the last 4 bars

 

[Mc LoUiE]

ight thnx for the feedback...

 

[BaYzHe||!PoW!||]

aight

this wasn't bad... some reflection-type shit... pretty good ideas... just work on rhyme scheme and flow...

 

[Mc LoUiE]

thnx bayzhe