Just need some feedback. Thanks

[DK Graphikz]

whats up, havent been on here for a while. So I'm pretty rusty with this photoshop stuff now. Just wanted some feedback on this fake album cover I made for my art class final project. Any feedback would be great, thanks.

 

[Calm 1 NPK 503]

IMHO it would look much better w/o the text on top other than that its aight!

 

[numba2stunna]

Not feeling the pink or the JAY-Z text.... but I see the pic you used had pink...

personally I would have went with something more Gangster... pink ain't Gangster...

 

[DK Graphikz]

haha yeah, well its just for my art class, and i had to show repetitive art some how. so thats why i did the text the way it is

 

[D-Skrilla]

I actually like the Jay Z text. Putting all of the album titles in his name was a nice idea.

 

[FANATIKAL]

i like it too. nice

 

[underground]

I agree, I like the text a lot

 

[thebrain]

i think it's really dope man. props. pinkish color wouln't represent jay-z well though. in other words jay-z wouldn't like it. but it's really dope for a fake album 9/10 from the brain

 

[DK Graphikz]

thanks guys for your responses. i presented my work to the class for our final project and the teacher was really impressed that she asked to keep my project. I actually did the full lay out here it is.

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[5xLoC]

i like that shit alot!!!!... id change the color though... not like its hard, to give it a blue theme or somethin like that

 

[thebrain]

w/the pink and everything... might as well make it a beyonce cd or something. or a jay-z beyonce: duet lol