Jus a few Bars

[KODOGG]

Jus' a few bar's im workin' on.. Drop yo 2Cents.

I walk in this place wit a strap-wraped 'round ma waist //
Incase anotha-brotha wanna test this Insane-Indivisual //
Visions Runnin thru ma brain of death //
All I got left is a half gone O.E Bottle keepin me in my Sanity //
Branded-Me useless cuz I aint got the talent they got-in-em //
But that dont mean Ima end up a Nobody locced in Pris-on //
If I wanna be a rapper thats my decision //
Inscriptions-written In a Note Boke explanin' ma life //
It's ma future not your's, I Dont plan ta have a wife 'n kids //
To Much sins been involved in ma livin' to be givin' birth to anotha' //
R.I.P To ma Brotha' aint dead yet but he's buildin' the grave 'n diggin the hole //
A Corrupted Soul taken over with Powdered Substances //
Drugs putin me in trances messin' up who I hate 'n who I love //
I apologize fo not showin enough respect - But I didnt Elect ya' as ma father? //

 

[-TiM C-]

that didnt really rhyme....

 

[KODOGG]

^^ Actually it does besides a few bars.. lol.. But trust me most of it does you jus' gotta' look.. Tell me what bar's you talkin' bout dawg.

 

[WcMalice]

I caught all your rhymes cuzz.....some are in kinda funny places but I seen em all.....my suggestion for you on a piece like this is to try and use shorter bars, if you make your lines shorter but you rhymes more complex it makes the flow A LOT smoother, and your content will be better.........good shit though folks, write shit for you, fuck everybody else.....

 

[KODOGG]

^^ Real talk 'n if you noticed mayne im shortenin bar's each peice.. checc ma older peices where the bar's were like 4 and ended wit 1 rhyme.. Im workin' on it.

 

[Greg Double]

im feelin this mayne.. you need to drop that, then hit touch back with the audio..