Ironic Commando -vs- Troll

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TROLL

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:cool:
rematch to settle tie..

and u kno
nothin personal strictly lyrical...


I come into ur spot, makin noise like a band-stand-
if verbalz were appendagez, u bout to catch a back hand-

u ain killin with your crackz-man, your alias should be charmin-
wipe my ass wit ur flow book, its not a fly that you'll be harmin-

wheres the war?? its been startin, why u claimin u commando??-
when u comin to the battle and not a weapon in your hand tho??-

cuz what u got at your disposal are some lyrical DUDz!-
ur Flow stylez been dying, im simply pullin the PLUG-

provide proverbial slug, Now tell me isnt it IRONIC?-
How you claim ur droppin bombz but i came wit the atomic?-

how i bloodied up your bonnet, you should find a new hobby!!-
biggest word in the world can't hide the fact that u sorry!!

u can tell it to maury, cuz ill be pointin and laughin-
at what u badly lackin in ya life and ya rappin-

couldnt get dry wall crackin, nothin destructive bout your taunts!-
let me crack webster, ok, Ironic post your response...
 
Big E

Big E

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Nov 10, 2004
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I am.

You can just forget your back hand, cuz I'm comin' with a steel toe,
Here, borrow MY rhyme book, it might help you write a real flow.

I kill hoes, and lyrically slaughter all you lames,
The only time you drop atomic bombs is in your haynes.

For sure the wars been started, but won't be seein me tho,
I'll pass you out, inject syringes full of herpes in your pee hole.

Take away the oxycontin so you have to sit and suffer,
I'll make you fold, cuz you got told, yo name is troll the butt hole stuffer.

You the one who's sorry, cuz it doesn't rhyme with hobby,
Yo rhymes are kinda sloppy, so give me credit if you copy.

What you typed is straight jalopy, now I'm the one laughin',
beating me's like winning lotto, homie it will never happen.

Why you runnin' at the lip, takin' shit on a Commando
at least he didn't come to war, with his dick up in his hand bro.

It's really kind of sad tho, I'm knowin' why they call you troll,
cuz you look just like your pic, and your flows suck more than a black hole

LOL sorry I'm bored at work.
 
Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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Dec 13, 2003
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knowing my record is knowing your place. my raps are like a punch to your mouth...and you looking back holding-your-face//
clips get bananas, im "dole"-ing the-hate//
bitter rapping south paw, throwing-at-fakes//
leaving your face to fold-and-embrace my fist like puddy mold-and-encase..//
battling you i'd have to be slowing-my-pace..cause your flows are out shape....throwing up waste//
im already at the finish line holding-the-tape, encouraging you keep-moving//
you are weak-proving you're a bitch who needs-soothing, your boo-hooings and meak-musing//defeats-ensuing//
im like song cant download, im "queueing" you to slit-your-wrists//
my verses-hurt, lee and kan wanted me to participate in their circle-jerk, but i only give my dick-to-chicks//
i'll even flip-the-script to make sure we are on the same-page//just to set you up to get your mane-sprayed//
i bring the realness in the form of steel-clips//
and if you dont feel-this...it'd be tough for you to kill-this guilt-trip//
although my blade is rusty...it still-rips ...imbued-with despair isolation and stillness//
and unto to you, my son, i will instill-this illness//
like the hulk...siccness makes me stronger as disease-gained//
you'll get your keyboard snapped in half, fingers broken and knees-sprained// i'll slit your throat and have you talkin with a voice box like t-pain//
with that cloth draped over...your blood will leave the sheets-stained
 
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TROLL

Sicc OG
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Aug 8, 2003
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Right on yall.. yeah i peep the thread and folx were saying he wasnt interested when he offered the rematch lol :cool:

@ironic: good flow, kinda hard to tell who your battlin specifically cuz its kinda general with the punchlines but im sure it goes good to a beat..
 
Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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TROLL said:
Right on yall.. yeah i peep the thread and folx were saying he wasnt interested when he offered the rematch lol :cool:

@ironic: good flow, kinda hard to tell who your battlin specifically cuz its kinda general with the punchlines but im sure it goes good to a beat..
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i tend not to play off someones name...seems too easy to me

oh...and i was the one who said i was uninterested in that battle. no one asked me for permission before signing me up for a battle...so fuck them
 
FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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Ironic Commando said:
i dont ramble...you just didnt graduate. cant blame that on me
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You don't ramble? Point out one bar in that load of nonsense that might apply to your opponent, Troll, even remotely. You said absolutely NOTHING.. There were NO personals whatsoever. The only way I could tell this sorry excuse for a verse was directed at someone here on the Siccness is because you mentioned LEE and Kantown in the verse.. Other than that, your sorry ass verse could be aimed towards anyone, anywhere. You didn't even try to clown Troll in any way. Your rhymes, though multis, were lame as fuck and the verse was boring as hell. I literally had to force myself thru it because I wanted to quit reading halfway thru.

Vote - Troll.
 
FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

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Apr 25, 2002
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Ironic Commando said:
i tend not to play off someones name...seems too easy to me
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No, you tend not to play off someone's name because you don't know how to battle. Period.

But Troll said the punchlines were general.. In no way do you NEED to play off someone's name to make the battle relevent to that person. Find something that Troll's said or done, critique his style/rhymes, ANYTHING..
 
Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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Dec 13, 2003
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to make you feel better


Ironic Commando said:
knowing my record is knowing your place. my raps are like a punch to your mouth...and you looking back holding-your-face//
clips get bananas, im "dole"-ing the-hate//
bitter rapping south paw, throwing-at-fakes// TROLL-
leaving your face to fold-and-embrace my fist like puddy mold-and-encase..//TROLL-
battling you i'd have to be slowing-my-pace..cause your flows are out shape....throwing up waste//
im already at the finish line holding-the-tape, encouraging you keep-moving// TROLL-
you are weak-proving you're a bitch who needs-soothing, your boo-hooings and meak-musing//defeats-ensuing//
im like song cant download, im "queueing" you to slit-your-wrists//
my verses-hurt, lee and kan wanted me to participate in their circle-jerk, but i only give my dick-to-chicks//TROLL
i'll even flip-the-script to make sure we are on the same-page//just to set you up to get your mane-sprayed//TROLL
i bring the realness in the form of steel-clips// TROLL
and if you dont feel-this...it'd be tough for you to kill-this guilt-trip//TROLL
although my blade is rusty...it still-rips ...imbued-with despair isolation and stillness// TROLL
and unto to you, my son, i will instill-this illness//
like the hulk...siccness makes me stronger as disease-gained// TROLL
you'll get your keyboard snapped in half, fingers broken and knees-sprained// TROLL
i'll slit your throat and have you talkin with a voice box like t-pain//
with that cloth draped over...your blood will leave the sheets-stained
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Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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FATAL NYGHTMARE said:
No, you tend not to play off someone's name because you don't know how to battle. Period.

But Troll said the punchlines were general.. In no way do you NEED to play off someone's name to make the battle relevent to that person. Find something that Troll's said or done, critique his style/rhymes, ANYTHING..
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bah...go drop a mixtape that will go nowhere
 
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