If you can't feel it..than its untouchable

[Daveyboy]

just someshit i wrote down when i first came to iraq..i had alot of time to think and this is what i pumped out, its in a poem form of some sort so let me know what chu think...

Disgracing races, a corrupted worlds got me trading places with a monster,
only time will tell, when the madness ends cuzz my lifes been hell....
so listen up cuzz ive gotta story to tell,
so here it is...
lifes been fucked up since my beginning,
six year old boy thinking about sex, drugs and rock and roll got my head spinning,
so many demans so many angels "pretending" whats right but flying the wrong path,
not known there plan unaware of the aftermath,
so many dreams missing,
only a mother to high to listen,
a little boy not knowing any better,
home alone no parent no baby sitter,
stripped from the life that he's only known,
only left with visions of a protected family and a happy home,
passing from hell to a little peice of heaven,
but his minds back to mud by the age 11,
theiving lurking in the darkness to hide from it all,
someone was watching above guiding this boy to a man that refuses to fall...
who knows my outcome but god..