Not bad man especially since you're just dippin into this. The only issue I have is the darkness. I'm on a bright lcd monitor and it's still really dark.
Pretty good, the title text is well done, pictures look a lil' bit outta place though, try to smoothen the cuts and transition them into the graphic better...
If you're using Photoshop, try the blend/blur tool, you might also wanna mess with the contrast just to see what look you like, it works great for monochrome styled graphics...
