flyer i made...feedback appreciated

[UnLieutenant]

some feedback from y'all would be nice.

 

[tosin]

the lil swirl thing doesnt really fit...i like the photography alot...it may be a lil darker than i would like...but good overall...

and the f and the l in flagship run together a lil too much...they kinda look like an h...

 

[UnLieutenant]

the lil swirl thing doesnt really fit...i like the photography alot...it may be a lil darker than i would like...but good overall...

and the f and the l in flagship run together a lil too much...they kinda look like an h...

thanks for the feedback.

the phtograph has bad lighting that's true but i liked it and decided to use it anway...

and that's also true what you say about the "F" and the "L"... hmmm maybe i can move them further apart....

 

[noWetaG]

^widen the KERNING setting on those 2 letters
on the CHARACTER palette to fix that problem......

 

[UnLieutenant]

^widen the KERNING setting on those 2 letters
on the CHARACTER palette to fix that problem......

cool thanks for the tip

 

[Calm 1 NPK 503]

Cover looks clean

 

[INCHEZ]

nice work...
I like the angle it's shot from ..very unique

 

[CcytzO_Loc]

yeah fix the kerning on that f and l otherwise looks clean overall....good work....

 

[underground]

DOPE...I AGREE JUST FIX THE TEXT BUT ITS ON POINT

 

[UnLieutenant]

thanks alot y'all!

i'll try to work on that text bit.

in hindsight i really feel like the photo shoot was messed up. the lighting sucked and all... but we didn't have to pay so it's allright...

 

[noWetaG]

u can really make a good pic of that if you make a
BRIGHTNESS/CONTRAST adjustment layer...
but have this adjustment layer ONLY affect the dood on the left
by masking out EVERYTHING BUT him on this adjustment layer
to make him as bright as dood on the right..........

 

[Mr. Samos]

I like this, it's cool, it's different, basic, but clean!

The photo is fine, I'm feeling all the vinyl, noticed the Doggystyle joint.

But you really need to fix that F. It looks like Ragship Records.

 

[UnLieutenant]

ok, i tried to fix the "F" problem and make my man on the left a bit brighter.
the problem really is the hard light coming in from the left that creates a shadow on his face...

 

[King_Jr]

Yeah that looks better than the first one you fixed the brightness and the letters. Good job.

 

[City Situation]

One thing that bugs me is that there's so many fonts. The two cursive ones could have easily been the same font.

I really like it though.

 

[UnLieutenant]

One thing that bugs me is that there's so many fonts. The two cursive ones could have easily been the same font.

I really like it though.

good point.
but the "flagship records" font is kinda set, because that's the font that's also in the label's logo. and i wanted something very handwriting-like at the bottom.

 

[TRAJIK1]

dope

 

[azryda420]

lol the guy ion the right is brighter cause hes white. hahahah

coo cover. only complain is the main text looks like ragship instead of flagship.

i like the photo angle too.

 

[UnLieutenant]

aight, thanks everybody!!

i think i'll leave it as it is now with the brightness adjustment and the font fixed