Me an My Homegurl got inna Dizcuzzion tha otha day bout diz old battle I had..
It waz thiz one on 411hype.com, if any of yall have heard of it, An I was battlin thiz one particular gurl, 'Concord', who thought she waz invincible and couldnt be beat.
Anywayz...So I battled her, and won by a vote or two.
Me an My homegurl waz gettin' into it, becuz I thought my verse was ten tymez better...Considering that i won..
She was sayin that her verse waz better, an people waz just ridin' me in votez, an she shoulda won.
Read tha battle an tell me what yall'z opinion iz...pleaze don't sleep on diz...
Thanx...~1ne~
Concord'z verse..
This is proof right here... I'll rip any competitor... ESPECIALLY Femcees....
Esa bitch, I'll chase ya, and rip your fuckin face up/
I'm laughin 'cause my skills just cut up like a thousand razors//
I should be paid for deliverin rhythms so genuine/
Face it, you just can't Stan(d) as if my name was Eminem//
I'll squeeze venom in your intestines to break down your SHIT/
You couldn't flow hard, idiot, if you tried to drown a dick//
Counterfeit - fake Femcee fuck who can't bust enough/
To break my battle record, girl I bring the baddest stuff//
Batter up -- I throw more fly pitches than baseball teams -- Peeps/
Couldn't be more undecided 'bout your skill than 8-ball screens//
Take off please, 'fore I rape your screen and leave your verse distrought/
You're already dead, but I'd still raid your tomb like Laura Croft//
Damn, you say you're showin off? I'd rather say you're SHOWIN FACE/
'cause your picture looks like an ass and you're SHOWIN SHIT on your verse's space//
You got your style all backwards, switch your words, "I spit nicely"/
When instead you nicely spit, 'cause you PUNCH left when you rap righty//
I'm hot, 'tho I'm half-whitey, a cultural balance of many nations/
Sit tightly, I serve sanctions letting my words you hurt your reptutation//
I bet you're breakin, bringin bogas battle words to this bash/
I'm makin bigger marks than your stretch ones on your freak fat ass//
ESA, Evasive from Spitting Amazing, is that why you suck so much?/
Or cause you duck so much, avoiding a fight so your record's untouched?//
Doubt that - the only thing untouched on you, slut, are your nasty lips/
No man would every kiss a pair that's sucked on every dick//
oooooh HIT! like Battleship, I'll strike you down with every punch/
Until I kick a KO, cause chaos, n make you cry before lunch//
Pop, crackle, CRUNCH -- the sound of your crushed bones vividly illustrated/
This battle's easy, you're a WEAK BEAT, like you were syncopated//
I cause more blood than menstruation, envasion of the mind and spirit/
eSa, you're nice, but you're not NICE, note the notorious skill in my lyrics//
My Verse..
At the End of this Battle you'll be Ripped like a Pussy to an Oversized Dick..
Your Length ain't enough because im Rough, Layin it on You too Thick..
Don't Contradict the Outcome,We all know I'm Right..
Invading your Insides as if I was the Tapeworm Parasite..
Put up a Fight, but like a Dick you Still gonna 'Get Beat'..
Comin Hard Only on yah Bedsheet, Splittin your Head Open like Machetes-to-Wheat..
U can Lick my Toes if you want to Taste De-feat(Da Feet)..
You about to Feel the Heat that Eminates from my thoughts Like Radioactive Pits..
Remove Your-Eyelids in the face of A Cobra So you can just Visualize my Spits..
No use Matchin Wits, I'll Fuck up that perfect record and like Sleepy Hollow Leave ya Head Severed on Mission..
Droppin More Verbs on ya then an Edition of Webster's Word..
The only thing you Successfully Conquered(Concord) is Your Sex-Change that Occured..
Like an Impotent Man* I Couldn't give a Fuck..
Was that You in Juvenile's Video?..Because your known All over for Backin dat Ass up..
Sayin you Cause Blood?The Only Blood I see is from tha Stress I caused you, mass Hemmhorrhaging..
Get ya Ass off The Window..Cuz all I see is Shit on the Screen..
Wash the Nut off your Face so you can Come Clean..
Half Whitey? Alrighty, quit Masturbating to the N'Sync Magazine..
I'm already Makin' u Turn Green Wit Jeal-ou-sy..
Quit your Lesbian Actions and Get the Hell-Off-Me..
You ain't even On my Level, you startin' From the Bottom Floor..
I Peel off your Fake Ass Fronts of 'Nice Girl' And Expose you to the 'Core'..
Leave your Verse FucKed Good, Only Wishin' you had More 'Touch'..
Your Like a Fuckin Squirrel..You Simply Eat too Much Nutt.. A Fake ass Suicide..Never able to Make the Final Cut..
Take Tha Mask Off So you can show your True Face..
I Burn Acidic Like Sprayin' Mace..
The only way you can be Notorious is the way your B.I.G. Ass takes up Too much Space..
This aint All in Fun so Don't take me as a Joker..
Leavin you now Sucked dry and Speechless Like Dracula from Bram Stoker*..
*yall know what impotent is...lol
*Bram Stoker was the writer of the book Dracula
It waz thiz one on 411hype.com, if any of yall have heard of it, An I was battlin thiz one particular gurl, 'Concord', who thought she waz invincible and couldnt be beat.
Anywayz...So I battled her, and won by a vote or two.
Me an My homegurl waz gettin' into it, becuz I thought my verse was ten tymez better...Considering that i won..
She was sayin that her verse waz better, an people waz just ridin' me in votez, an she shoulda won.
Read tha battle an tell me what yall'z opinion iz...pleaze don't sleep on diz...
Thanx...~1ne~
Concord'z verse..
This is proof right here... I'll rip any competitor... ESPECIALLY Femcees....
Esa bitch, I'll chase ya, and rip your fuckin face up/
I'm laughin 'cause my skills just cut up like a thousand razors//
I should be paid for deliverin rhythms so genuine/
Face it, you just can't Stan(d) as if my name was Eminem//
I'll squeeze venom in your intestines to break down your SHIT/
You couldn't flow hard, idiot, if you tried to drown a dick//
Counterfeit - fake Femcee fuck who can't bust enough/
To break my battle record, girl I bring the baddest stuff//
Batter up -- I throw more fly pitches than baseball teams -- Peeps/
Couldn't be more undecided 'bout your skill than 8-ball screens//
Take off please, 'fore I rape your screen and leave your verse distrought/
You're already dead, but I'd still raid your tomb like Laura Croft//
Damn, you say you're showin off? I'd rather say you're SHOWIN FACE/
'cause your picture looks like an ass and you're SHOWIN SHIT on your verse's space//
You got your style all backwards, switch your words, "I spit nicely"/
When instead you nicely spit, 'cause you PUNCH left when you rap righty//
I'm hot, 'tho I'm half-whitey, a cultural balance of many nations/
Sit tightly, I serve sanctions letting my words you hurt your reptutation//
I bet you're breakin, bringin bogas battle words to this bash/
I'm makin bigger marks than your stretch ones on your freak fat ass//
ESA, Evasive from Spitting Amazing, is that why you suck so much?/
Or cause you duck so much, avoiding a fight so your record's untouched?//
Doubt that - the only thing untouched on you, slut, are your nasty lips/
No man would every kiss a pair that's sucked on every dick//
oooooh HIT! like Battleship, I'll strike you down with every punch/
Until I kick a KO, cause chaos, n make you cry before lunch//
Pop, crackle, CRUNCH -- the sound of your crushed bones vividly illustrated/
This battle's easy, you're a WEAK BEAT, like you were syncopated//
I cause more blood than menstruation, envasion of the mind and spirit/
eSa, you're nice, but you're not NICE, note the notorious skill in my lyrics//
My Verse..
At the End of this Battle you'll be Ripped like a Pussy to an Oversized Dick..
Your Length ain't enough because im Rough, Layin it on You too Thick..
Don't Contradict the Outcome,We all know I'm Right..
Invading your Insides as if I was the Tapeworm Parasite..
Put up a Fight, but like a Dick you Still gonna 'Get Beat'..
Comin Hard Only on yah Bedsheet, Splittin your Head Open like Machetes-to-Wheat..
U can Lick my Toes if you want to Taste De-feat(Da Feet)..
You about to Feel the Heat that Eminates from my thoughts Like Radioactive Pits..
Remove Your-Eyelids in the face of A Cobra So you can just Visualize my Spits..
No use Matchin Wits, I'll Fuck up that perfect record and like Sleepy Hollow Leave ya Head Severed on Mission..
Droppin More Verbs on ya then an Edition of Webster's Word..
The only thing you Successfully Conquered(Concord) is Your Sex-Change that Occured..
Like an Impotent Man* I Couldn't give a Fuck..
Was that You in Juvenile's Video?..Because your known All over for Backin dat Ass up..
Sayin you Cause Blood?The Only Blood I see is from tha Stress I caused you, mass Hemmhorrhaging..
Get ya Ass off The Window..Cuz all I see is Shit on the Screen..
Wash the Nut off your Face so you can Come Clean..
Half Whitey? Alrighty, quit Masturbating to the N'Sync Magazine..
I'm already Makin' u Turn Green Wit Jeal-ou-sy..
Quit your Lesbian Actions and Get the Hell-Off-Me..
You ain't even On my Level, you startin' From the Bottom Floor..
I Peel off your Fake Ass Fronts of 'Nice Girl' And Expose you to the 'Core'..
Leave your Verse FucKed Good, Only Wishin' you had More 'Touch'..
Your Like a Fuckin Squirrel..You Simply Eat too Much Nutt.. A Fake ass Suicide..Never able to Make the Final Cut..
Take Tha Mask Off So you can show your True Face..
I Burn Acidic Like Sprayin' Mace..
The only way you can be Notorious is the way your B.I.G. Ass takes up Too much Space..
This aint All in Fun so Don't take me as a Joker..
Leavin you now Sucked dry and Speechless Like Dracula from Bram Stoker*..
*yall know what impotent is...lol
*Bram Stoker was the writer of the book Dracula