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as i ride, maybe racing, i stay scrappin
gas'n and brake'n, smoking weed like a jamaican
if its time im facing
watch me pass at a hundred
while the cops are chasing, still blowing a hundred
when the 1 times gone
its time to campaign
passing out cards, wit my # and my name
the way i came, aint the way im leaving
pulling dimes, while them hating niggaz dreaming
cuz they want what i have
quit whoofing nigga- you a sucka
not a sav
this is the day dont get fooled in the bay
im having thizzles like dubee and mac dre
designer drugs, pimps and thugs
humbolt county is were i get my buds
we keep close ties, stay networking
might take lives if we feel that your hurting
......... more to come!! stay tuned

 

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[Anghellic831]

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though when i was young, a little stupid, i learned from my mistakes
trying hard to not make the same that my father made
he chose to get paid, instead of being a father
ducking out when i was a baby, said fuck it why bother
i was too young to know, that my life would stay hard
either speaking about me or the life that ive endured
letting my anger out for a minute, it feels that im cured
kicking it late night always starting shit
the ones who chose to act bold were the first ones hit
the story of my life, TO EASE THE PAIN I GET LIT
i needed money, so i started to hustle
a little older now, you know we the blocks muscle
devils block 415, not saying shit about homicide
to many people get locked up for being real in they rhyme
or atleast falsly accused, there so many people fucked by the system
getting abused, by the npd
and like i said before im not fall-o-wing
my fathers path, to end up in quentin, ill kill myself b4 im living
in a little ass cell, but if i do go there
im sure ill be fine
cuz ive been through way harder times