But this is, life or death not overnight success

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May 19, 2002
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Just give me that bass line, aint no need to waste time//
Heard it through the grape vine, now you wanna take mine//
But this is, life or death not overnight success//
Ill snatch your life and ya ice and put ya mic in check//
Im on the outside lookin in, but dont judge//
Cuz Thats the downside to crooked friends, an old grudge//
But when the street life took my in, I sold drugs//
But when this cold world was lookin grim, it showed love//
So now I show it back, niggas wishin I wrote they rap//
Makin' track after track, you know I aint holdin back//
By the time you hear this, another album come out//
And if your mad you can kiss my ass with your tongue out//
I never run out, cuz If i did pull the gun out//
I run in yo crib, the one to live, pull the ones out//
But thats the dumb route//
Now Im tryin to live a better life//
Seven days seven nights whatever the price right//
 
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Im liken this shit...nice piece

Theres isn't anything i could suggest to improve it...Ya got shit on lock
 
Feb 12, 2003
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Just give me that bass line, aint no need to waste time//
Heard it through the grape vine, now you wanna take mine//
But this is, life or death not overnight success//
Ill snatch your life and ya ice and put ya mic in check//
Im on the outside lookin in, but dont judge//
Cuz Thats the downside to crooked friends, an old grudge//
But when the street life took my in, I sold drugs//
But when this cold world was lookin grim, it showed love//

^^ That's tight.. The rest could go cuz it dont fit what it started off as.