im sorry but i dont really find a mellody or any thing in ur music....if i was you id get on a musical diet of nuthin but OLDIES... al green, marvin gaye, teddy pendergrass,old quincey jones produced music, zapp, parlament, cameo, uhh....just raid ur dads records and 8 tracks...but don embarass ur self putin stuff like that on the net for every one to hear....