BEATS???Lookin for feedback

[Dvious]

I'm just startin out makin beats,so I know I'm not great..just tryin to get heard and get some feedback to help me progress.I know not everyone will feel them,any feedback is appreciated.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/detrimentalproductionzmusic.htm

 

[Nitwit]

the link dont work folks

 

[Dvious]

I think I fixed it...sorry bout that

 

[tadou]

A little bouncy, but you seem to have the idea. Good melodies in there, but some of the background sound effects were getting on my nerves.

This is definitely demo material though. It makes me wonder what you'd do with some better equipment at your fingertips.

 

[PersuAsian]

Yo D! Me and Lil Joe got a track done on 1 of ya old beats, get at Joe for a copy, I cant find mine!