To many parts were it seems like a freestyle or the lyrics are being forced and not coming naturally when being spit.
Just my honest opinion, I ain't no rapper.. I just wouldn't be looking to buy any of those dudes cds who are rapping in this song. Sounds like the timing is off on some of the delivery and all three rappers sound pretty much the same to me.
But as I said, I enjoyed that beat there, crazy sample you used, only thing I would redo or change is the hihats (donno if you did them or if it was auto hihats type shit or what).
Exclusive seems to be trying to help ya, and I agree that some of your beats sound like stock drums that a new mpc or new keyboard would have in there (they might not be, but thats what it sounds like at times). You def got a great ear for samples and cuttin em up, but your drums are the one thing I noticed that need work in your beats. Not hating one bit just giving honest feedback for ya, improve ya drums and youd only see improvement. Before ya say people hating, just remember that you start these threads and asking for feedback so people gonna give it to ya how they feel. Sure the odd person might striaght out hate just because its you posting the beat but most people are just tellin you how it sounds to them and nothing more, no hidden agenda.