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Apr 25, 2002
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right on, but im talkin bout cats who aint been here for a while and thinkin they got some great flow and all... i use to be a top dog here now it seems like i aint shit. maybe i aint though anymore i just want some answers yall
 
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Anghellic831 said:
U haven't fell or lost it dogg, real talk newbies need to reconize game on this piece.

keep it goin

thats what i thought, right on homie


ITS FREAKS said:
i dunno about your music, you might be really dope.
& i mean this with as much respect as possible but - the key i read (ive only read one) - it looked like just a bunch of words throwing into a paragraph, which doesnt help the reader determine your flow.

so i read two lines & got bored.

but thats just constructive feedback i was given ya, mane.

and thats what i wanted to hear right on man... i can see where your coming from, but thats just how i write my shit.... but ill remmeber that next verse i drop
 
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i think some of ur shit is descent, u gotta story to tell. I would listen ur shit and everybody elses on this website right now but i aint got access to do so. I'll definately give u some feedback on the audio as well. But on the written stuff i read from u, its different cuz i dont know how ur spittin them rhymes. Thats pretty much the same thing with everybody else doin the written battle thing. Just keep at it. When i get back home i'll battle u on the audio. I'll battle everybody else too if they want it. Its good for practice. peace