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Add a half bar then 2 bars and another half bar... the next person has to rhyme off your last line to make it a complete bar....so basically finish the unfinished line.. add two bars.. then add another unfinished line for the next person....

startin...


There once was a man, like jollopy's he was broke-
seen a clown in the mirror yet he couldnt take a joke..

One morning he said fuck it imma bout to get paid-
no more sittin at home, no progress was being made-

He strolled down his block and what did he see?-
 
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There once was a man, like jollopy's he was broke-
seen a clown in the mirror yet he couldnt take a joke..

One morning he said fuck it imma bout to get paid-
no more sittin at home, no progress was being made-

He strolled down his block and what did he see?-
this kid that owed him money /
comin' down the street

ran up on him /
and hit 'em up for the cash

dude said he ain't payin', and started to laugh /
 
Aug 2, 2005
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BETO916 said:
this kid that owed him money /
comin' down the street

ran up on him /
and hit 'em up for the cash

dude said he ain't payin', and started to laugh /

Pissed the man off with his little chuckle
Took off his belt and hit him with the buckle

"Who's laughing now, you little bitch
Give me my money, I'm trying to get rich"

The kid looks at the man, and says "you must be crazy"
 
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420gurl said:
Pissed the man off with his little chuckle
Took off his belt and hit him with the buckle

"Who's laughing now, you little bitch
Give me my money, I'm trying to get rich"

The kid looks at the man, and says "you must be crazy"
"I'll have you pissin your Goddamn pants like Chucky's-baby"/

The man got pissed, and proceeded beatin-the-kid/
Talkin bout "without my cash I got no reason-to-live"/

Then he reached to his wasteband to pull-out-the-steel/
The kid thought to himself "damn, this fool's-out-to-kill"/

And just as he was about to give the trigger a squeeze....
 
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"I'll have you pissin your Goddamn pants like Chucky's-baby"/

The man got pissed, and proceeded beatin-the-kid/
Talkin bout "without my cash I got no reason-to-live"/

Then he reached to his wasteband to pull-out-the-steel/
The kid thought to himself "damn, this fool's-out-to-kill"/

And just as he was about to give the trigger a squeeze....


the kid got all bruce lee n' shit on motha-fucka's knees

caught by surprize, old motha-fucka dropped his gun
it was then he realized his days of hustlin' was done

he begged the kid for mercy, but kid said "no way, pops...."
 
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"......I believe the Children Are The Future so let me lead the way"/
picked up the old man's gat and started to spray/

But the old man was an old G/
Told the kid "the broke the mold when they made me"/

So Pops... Jackie Channed the gat back but the shit fuckin' jammed.....
 
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Furious32 said:
"......I believe the Children Are The Future so let me lead the way"/
picked up the old man's gat and started to spray/

But the old man was an old G/
Told the kid "the broke the mold when they made me"/

So Pops... Jackie Channed the gat back but the shit fuckin' jammed.....

kid said "dont shoot, ill pay u your grands"/

but the Old dude wasnt havin it~"its been 2 weeks"/
"give my cash right now, cause u dead if you speak"/

kid started laughin, "gun aint loaded"/
old dude, shot once, and kid was left frozen/

jaw dropped now he new it was serious/


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nice...

the panic in his head had his thoughts delierious...

But before the second round was about to be expelled-
this breezy crossed the street jewled up, she must be paid well-

Ill get your skrill, dont even trip..
dood seen the ho and told the kid.. better go pull that lik-

the kid looked left and right and started to cross...
 
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the kid looked left and right and started to cross...
step by step across the ashphalt straightening his collar like a boss...

thoughts race like greyhounds around in circles in his mind....
how to approach this bitch, trippin on a matrix glitch, get her from behind...

picking up the pace chucks laced proceed to a jogging motion...
leapin from an ideal distance fist tight moving in slow motion...

during mid-flight she started to glance over her shoulder...
 
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during mid-flight she started to glance over her shoulder...
the bitch was a cop!! /

she spun around /
pulled a toaster from her holster

kid with the glock bugged /
damn, now shit is drastic

so, before the cop could shoot /
the kid emptied his plastic....
:dead:
 
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stretched the bitchs face out like some cheap elastic,

he started to run knowin the snitchs would make a call,
now his whole life is ruined, this kid has lost it all,
he decided to deliver a bullet few inchs above his cheek,
that shit had him fucced up, now hes pullin to breathe,

the kid lay on the street, screaming for satin to take his soul,
 
Oct 14, 2004
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Until I take control I watch mcs fall and fold on the pavement..

Cats feel enslavement when I trap their mind inside a twisted prizim/
Have a SCHISM when I grab the TOOL and use it to unload on a fool/
Is this the life I was lead to live, or just a thought of a demon to give/
Its all over for these fake rap cats once Arkhtype steps in for Death/

Took this thread like the gas chamber will soon take my last breath.....ARKHETYPE
 
Feb 12, 2003
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Rob S4 said:
Took this thread like the gas chamber will soon take my last breath.....ARKHETYPE
"Gettin Stepped-On-Like-Carpet" N now the kids "on the run like Michael-Johnson" //

Uh Pyscho-Who-Lost-It N "throws back handles" on blunts like uh "Alchaholic",
Tha Kids About-It N On the "Grind" like "Tony-Hawk" //

Now Tha "Cops-On-Ma Nuts" Like Uh "Jock-Strap",
Talk-Trash N this OG will put ya' Brains-On-Tha-Street //

Slaing-And-Cheif Now Tha Kids Insane-Wit-Greif.........
 
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Slaing-And-Cheif Now Tha Kids Insane-Wit-Greif.........
back to the story, kid's layin' dyin' on the street.

the shot to his cheek nearly split his grill in half
blood was leakin' from his melon like he takin' a bath

when the ambulance arrived, kid was dead already
paramedic said "this dudes head looks like a plate of spaghetti"

as they were scraping up what once was the kid's head off the ground....
 
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all that was to be heard was this pitifull ass sound,

the old man with no game relized what he had done,
and wondered how he could do all this shit to his own son,
he was kneeled down on one knee, cryin in the street,
as the took his kid away, his body covered with a sheet,

i was there on that day and witnessed everything that had happened,
 
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reppin_the_509 said:
i was there on that day and witnessed everything that had happened,
I was too and I couldnt keep ma' self from laughing,

Plastered as I watched them take away tha' kid in-a-stretcher,
Cuz Im used ta' seein'-homies gettin jumped like Checkards //

This "Touching"-story would only apeal to-uh-"Molester",
Drinkin'-40z N Now Im Spinnin' Like Uh Record //

Everythin'-was-coo Except-For tha man who suddenly started Blastin-Tha-Men-In-Blue...
 
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Everythin'-was-coo Except-For tha man who suddenly started Blastin-Tha-Men-In-Blue...
no more ammo /
now he's catchin' more than a few

"hot ones echo through the ghetto /
bullets ricochet"...

from his dome /
on down through his ribcage

seems strange /

to go through all of this /
just to get paid.....
 
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BETO916 said:
to go through all of this /
just to get paid.....
I Go Thru All This Every Single-Day,

Hustle-In-Tha-Rain if ya' got-too,
Cop-QP's and Dodge-Police... //

Stop-Phonies N Drop-Mo-Heat Then Sunrise,
Im at Tha' Scene thinkin Someones-Gonna-Die //

N That's when I noticed mo' bullets Come-By.................
 
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KODOGG said:
N That's when I noticed mo' bullets Come-By.................

Some die for this life we lead as Mc's/

Get more claps then prostitutes with VD/
We see the sights of the verbs and nouns/
That pound on street grounds in cities and towns/
I found the everlasting flow from the essence/

People step inside my world to feel my presence...Arkhetype