1st post on this site. CHALLENGIN SUMONE FOR A BATTLE
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battle verse
aight man here is my verse. holla back.
Watch out ya'll!! School just broke out
Muthafuckas rapping sounding like their voice choked out
What the fuck ya'll about - ya too young to know
You don't even know what a bar is or even a hot flow
I know dough better than Pillsbury & it's real scary
More money more problems, like a bitch that's lip's hairy
Ain't no whack rhymer here, check your reflection
Lonestar bitch ass muthafuckas thinking of a wickitshit resurrection
The wickitshit is dead, just like ya raps
You don't know game, but I roll higher than craps
Fuck all your daps, peep this shit here
Now put your eyes to the screen & see this shit clear
LIMPDICKFEELA AIN'T NOTHIN BUT A BITCH
Hell, muthafuckas like u pobably ridin with a snitch
Man I should take it easy on him, hes whack- fuck that, I'll break him
I'm the creative inventor - peep my hot rhyme center
He wouldn't know sharp with his rhymes like rusted blades
With his high pitched voice, sounded like a fag who gots AIDS
I can destory this mothafucka in about 11 bars
Leave ya gaspin for air, like my rhyme's SARS
So step back bitch, 'cuz i'm bout to take aim
& i'm bout to blow up - uh oh - there goes the WORLD TRADE!!
:dead:
aight man here is my verse. holla back.
Watch out ya'll!! School just broke out
Muthafuckas rapping sounding like their voice choked out
What the fuck ya'll about - ya too young to know
You don't even know what a bar is or even a hot flow
I know dough better than Pillsbury & it's real scary
More money more problems, like a bitch that's lip's hairy
Ain't no whack rhymer here, check your reflection
Lonestar bitch ass muthafuckas thinking of a wickitshit resurrection
The wickitshit is dead, just like ya raps
You don't know game, but I roll higher than craps
Fuck all your daps, peep this shit here
Now put your eyes to the screen & see this shit clear
LIMPDICKFEELA AIN'T NOTHIN BUT A BITCH
Hell, muthafuckas like u pobably ridin with a snitch
Man I should take it easy on him, hes whack- fuck that, I'll break him
I'm the creative inventor - peep my hot rhyme center
He wouldn't know sharp with his rhymes like rusted blades
With his high pitched voice, sounded like a fag who gots AIDS
I can destory this mothafucka in about 11 bars
Leave ya gaspin for air, like my rhyme's SARS
So step back bitch, 'cuz i'm bout to take aim
& i'm bout to blow up - uh oh - there goes the WORLD TRADE!!
:dead:
ur rhymes
hy man i read them and i liked ur batttles. u had sum good punchlines. but i think thre should be more. u have good ones, so ad more good ones. also when u battle u wan to make sure u make tha guy u are battlin as exposed as u can. it wuz not that long ago i wuznt that good until a dude Andre sent me this thing right here.
For tha Battle You Gonna Need "Metaphores" Wordplay, Punchlines,
Creativity, dissin, Personals and Content...
Punchline= You Could "Swallow" a whole "Jail Cell" and still wouldn't "Spit Bars"..
Wordplay= Cow-word(Coward) Or anything That Contains tha same word 2 Different meanings..
Example: I Have 7 Buttons Buttoned Up, Why Don't You Fasten-Eight? (Fasinate)
Metaphores: I'll "Cutt ya Body" up "Tiny" in tha "Size of Fleas"..
Dragg YOU In Dirt and Stabb You w/ a Broken Bottle
^ Etc..
Show em How Skilled You are in a Battle..
Instead of usin 1 word syllables..
Start usin 2-3
I Seen a "Black-Cat"
YOU Can't even "Attack-that"
^ 2 Word syllables..
Here's 3:
Died-to-day(Today)
Find-a-way..
I like ur rhymes Man Dont Gett me wrong but when You battle You battle 2 Kill!!..
here we go man i hope it helps. it helped me
peace
4-1-9 TOLEDO
hy man i read them and i liked ur batttles. u had sum good punchlines. but i think thre should be more. u have good ones, so ad more good ones. also when u battle u wan to make sure u make tha guy u are battlin as exposed as u can. it wuz not that long ago i wuznt that good until a dude Andre sent me this thing right here.
For tha Battle You Gonna Need "Metaphores" Wordplay, Punchlines,
Creativity, dissin, Personals and Content...
Punchline= You Could "Swallow" a whole "Jail Cell" and still wouldn't "Spit Bars"..
Wordplay= Cow-word(Coward) Or anything That Contains tha same word 2 Different meanings..
Example: I Have 7 Buttons Buttoned Up, Why Don't You Fasten-Eight? (Fasinate)
Metaphores: I'll "Cutt ya Body" up "Tiny" in tha "Size of Fleas"..
Dragg YOU In Dirt and Stabb You w/ a Broken Bottle
^ Etc..
Show em How Skilled You are in a Battle..
Instead of usin 1 word syllables..
Start usin 2-3
I Seen a "Black-Cat"
YOU Can't even "Attack-that"
^ 2 Word syllables..
Here's 3:
Died-to-day(Today)
Find-a-way..
I like ur rhymes Man Dont Gett me wrong but when You battle You battle 2 Kill!!..
here we go man i hope it helps. it helped me
peace
4-1-9 TOLEDO
