Young Chosiz
- Thread starter Sawchosiz
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@Sawchosiz
Your flow is definitely some shit, but you should take more time with your multis. Just trust that there will ALWAYS be a good rhyming word to fit.....and dont just rush to find "anything" to fit the 4 or 5 syllable structure. Once you get that part solid, everything else will fall into place.
Your flow is definitely some shit, but you should take more time with your multis. Just trust that there will ALWAYS be a good rhyming word to fit.....and dont just rush to find "anything" to fit the 4 or 5 syllable structure. Once you get that part solid, everything else will fall into place.
whats wrong with the Multis?
"you see i'm not happy with the Way-that-its-goin,The way-that-i'm-flowin, Is a-change-and-i'm-knowin/Its like the whole worlds weights-on-my-shoulders feel the Pain-of-a-soldier, I can't wait-till-its-ova"/
You makin rap un fun talkin about whats up with the Multis and punchlines...its like people don't enjoy music no more...if you don't like it don't listen...rap is all prefrence
I don't think anything is wack...I jus don't prefer it
"you see i'm not happy with the Way-that-its-goin,The way-that-i'm-flowin, Is a-change-and-i'm-knowin/Its like the whole worlds weights-on-my-shoulders feel the Pain-of-a-soldier, I can't wait-till-its-ova"/
You makin rap un fun talkin about whats up with the Multis and punchlines...its like people don't enjoy music no more...if you don't like it don't listen...rap is all prefrence
I don't think anything is wack...I jus don't prefer it
Then don't ask for feedback when you want people to listen to your shit. Some people's opinion is that the song is wack as fuck, that's their opinion. Just like your opinion or view is that you "don't prefer it." You have to listen to something to know you don't like it. I listened and didn't like it. I said so, you asked for feedback but were quick to speak negatively. Why? You didn't agree with my opinion. For some people shit being "wack" is okay, if it's not for you that's great, but understand not everyone shares your views.
FIRST OF ALL WHEN I POST ON HERE I USE ALL CAPS.....MY HOMEBOY WAZ ON THIS FORUM USIN MY CPU..HE THOUGHT THA SHIT WAZ WACC....I PERSONALLY AINT EVEN HEARED IT YET,NOR DID I PLAN TO....
AS FAR AS SAWKOWSICH "SHITTIN ON THIS WACC FAT SON OF A BITCH FROM SEA UNDER C-BO"..I FIND THAT REDICULOUS...U KNOW IM HOT....THATS WHY U LISTENED 2 MY SHIT...NOW ALL THIS INTERNET HATIN IS NOT MY THING..I HANDLE ALL MY BIZNESS IN THA STREETS...WHERE I BE ON THA DAILY....IM A REGISTERED FACTOR IN THESE STREETS,SO U NEED TO DO SOME HOME WORK B4 U BE ON HERE TYPIN RECKLESSLY.....
UR ENTITLED TO ANY OPINION U WANT....THATS COOL...,BUT IN REALITY I THINK U CAUGHT FEELINS (LIKE A BITCH WOULD) JUST CUZ U THOUGHT I SAID YOUR MUSIC WAZ WACC....NOW AINT I RIGHT? BE HONEST.
AS FAR AS SAWKOWSICH "SHITTIN ON THIS WACC FAT SON OF A BITCH FROM SEA UNDER C-BO"..I FIND THAT REDICULOUS...U KNOW IM HOT....THATS WHY U LISTENED 2 MY SHIT...NOW ALL THIS INTERNET HATIN IS NOT MY THING..I HANDLE ALL MY BIZNESS IN THA STREETS...WHERE I BE ON THA DAILY....IM A REGISTERED FACTOR IN THESE STREETS,SO U NEED TO DO SOME HOME WORK B4 U BE ON HERE TYPIN RECKLESSLY.....
UR ENTITLED TO ANY OPINION U WANT....THATS COOL...,BUT IN REALITY I THINK U CAUGHT FEELINS (LIKE A BITCH WOULD) JUST CUZ U THOUGHT I SAID YOUR MUSIC WAZ WACC....NOW AINT I RIGHT? BE HONEST.
Friend, i dont care what you do and dont think is fun; lyrics TO ME happen to be fun enough in themselves, because even if i didnt make a cent rhyming, i would still write.
That is ONE cross-section in there. But there are several others which fit what i said:
"..I was just so, so different/If something crossed my mind...i would just spit it"
"..Numerous men/Bustin nuts down ya throat on ya face and ya chin"
These sections and many more just do not match the rest of the track. Your lyrics are heated, AT POINTS. Certain other points cool the whole track down.
That is ONE cross-section in there. But there are several others which fit what i said:
"..I was just so, so different/If something crossed my mind...i would just spit it"
"..Numerous men/Bustin nuts down ya throat on ya face and ya chin"
These sections and many more just do not match the rest of the track. Your lyrics are heated, AT POINTS. Certain other points cool the whole track down.
@Notes I know your not implying that i'm scared of anyone you guys run with
I don't understand the question but you guys missed my point...i'm jus sayin if you don't like something it dosen't mean its wack...it jus means YOU don't like it
Any artist that says i'm wack is gonna catch it...cuz you all do the SAME THING I do
you shyt on my music i'm gonna shyt on yours