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BETO916

BETO916

Sicc OG
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Like a blunt of the good /
When it ain’t burnin’ right

You don’t want it with me, mane /
I ain’t wrapped too tight

Don’t mind me, yo /
if I put you on blast tonight

I’m ending your career /
‘cause you don’t rap too tight

Sayin’ words out of spite /

So your death is sudden /

A 7deuce Vet /
hit your block and got dumb’n

load up the Shure mic /
with an extra drum'n

let off 16 at your team /
and watch 'em all get to runnin’

scramblin’ and fumblin’/

lookin’ like little kids /
when the Ice Cream Man’s comin’

Defeat me, please /

I’ll never leave /

I'm rhymin' harder /
than petrified trees

Gettin' loonie like Yuk /
Before Master P stole his steez

After I spit my decree /

You’ll drop to your knees /

I’ll hit the up up down down left right /
bring on the FATAL-ITY/

JL get a count /
Tally up the casualties

See, you don't want mortal kombat/

Somewhere near your ass /
Is where your hearts at

Lyrically slappin’ men /
From beginning to end

Fuck that wack freestyle /
You should have picked up the pen

And commence to writin’ /

All that shit you kick /
Ain’t even excitin’

Mean muggin’ in the mirror /
Practicin' lookin’ hard while you’re typin’

Then post the same ol’ crap /
Full of wack shit & hyphens

Got the nerve to call ‘em multis /

Indecent hit you up /
But you’re comin’ after me?

I’m tellin’ you bro-ham /
You can’t get with my program /

Your crew’s nothin’ but mean girls /
So you must be Lindsey Lohan

Oh DAMN! /

When they asked who laid fatal down /
I’m that man

See me on Chico State campus /
In the Chronic Candy van

Getting’ stupid like Furl /
off two pills and priv

Up & Smoke tour made 5 G’s /
And I didn’t even spit

Everything legit /

Every item sold to the crowd /
I got a per-cent

Backstage slangin’ 2 1/2 for 50 /
that’s what they get

Blowin’ backwoods in Hollywood /
On red car-pet

At the Source Awards /
When Mac Minister start shit

Yeah,I been doin’ my thing /

Shared stages with the Liks and Xzibit /
Before he pimped ANYTHING

You fuckin’ peasant /

Ask Sunspot & PSC /
I’m a Living Legend

‘Cause more than crews I manage /

While doin’ damage /

I’ll manage /
to put one in your cabbage

Silly rabbit /
I’ll make this simple

FATAL’s a /

Fake Ass Thug Anti-Lyrical /

you wanted it, here you go /

I’m old school like analog, dog /
Broadcasting live in stereo
 
IntenseFear

IntenseFear

Sicc OG
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Feb 28, 2005
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Pretty good my nigga. Trailed off a lot and didn't really diss Fatal all that much, but it was a coo flow though. It aint touchin that nigga Fatal though, sorry my nigg.
 
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BIG CHORIZO

Sicc OG
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I think what IF is saying is you went off on other subjects, where-as Fatal remained on point with his diss.

You did come clean though carnal. Probably the best shit I've seen from you so far. But like it or not, FATAL is on another level when it comes to this rhymin shit. Anyone who disagrees with that is more than likely just hating and that's real. No nut hugging going on here pimpin, so whoever is gonna try to say I'm on Fatal's jock can kill it before they even type it. I've been around a long time and I have never seen as much denial as there is floating around here these days..
 
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Zo_The_Gorilla

Fresh
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Jun 29, 2005
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Oh boy! This deserves some attention!

Maybe next time he will sit down a write some shit...

CooL Shit Beto.

You got with him...Let these foolios know who you are and who you run with!!

These clowns ask to pose in pictures w/ the artists in your circle. Cats you break bread with.
 
Stealth

Stealth

Join date: May '98
#6
May 8, 2002
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That was a real tight rhyme. I was feelin that. I agree it trailed off on parts though. Kind of hard to read, but that's just me. Good shit though :dead:
 
BETO916

BETO916

Sicc OG
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Apr 7, 2005
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the funny thing is, fatal & I never had a disagreement on rhymin' until the other day...he's definately one of the best on this site...but you know how things get out of hand when you can't read expressions and body language...texting back & forth is a horrible way to communicate when emotions are involved...which I think was the case in our scuffle.

thanks for the props...careful, I don't want you to get labeled a nutt hugger for givin' me dap..LOL

(that was some sarcasim by the way)

peace carnal
 
IntenseFear

IntenseFear

Sicc OG
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Feb 28, 2005
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BETO916 said:
that's ya boy.
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This is the typa shit that pisses me off nigga. I don't know Fatal at all, you probably know him more than I do, but since I said his shit was better you gotta act like I'm his boy and just sayin that because we cool. Nah nigga. It's too much of that typa shit goin on around here.
 
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