i've been working on poetry. heres a piece, tell me what ya think
You live life,
Like everything's alright
Until one night,
Everything's not in plain sight
Then you search for answers,
And wonder why you might get cancer,
Or die of AIDS,
Or get shot in the brain,
Or die die of lonliness, or suffer from eternal pain
There's only hate in this world,
And no one can thrive,
I awake each morning, just hoping to die
They say I have my whole life ahead,
Why live as I do?
They don't know me, they don't walk in my shoes
You live to die, you live to cry
Deep thoughts run in my mind,
ANd give me a spiritual high,
But no light for my eyes
People judging others,
Brothers against brothers
I can not change the world,
If I myself, can not change
My heart filled with love,
But corrupted my by rage
I wish for the better,
But I continue to sin,
I must confess, But I don't know where to begin
this was a poem i wrote about how ppl take life as a joke and how ppl dont care about no one but themselves, like i have been doing for years. i gotta change, so should you. peace
You live life,
Like everything's alright
Until one night,
Everything's not in plain sight
Then you search for answers,
And wonder why you might get cancer,
Or die of AIDS,
Or get shot in the brain,
Or die die of lonliness, or suffer from eternal pain
There's only hate in this world,
And no one can thrive,
I awake each morning, just hoping to die
They say I have my whole life ahead,
Why live as I do?
They don't know me, they don't walk in my shoes
You live to die, you live to cry
Deep thoughts run in my mind,
ANd give me a spiritual high,
But no light for my eyes
People judging others,
Brothers against brothers
I can not change the world,
If I myself, can not change
My heart filled with love,
But corrupted my by rage
I wish for the better,
But I continue to sin,
I must confess, But I don't know where to begin
this was a poem i wrote about how ppl take life as a joke and how ppl dont care about no one but themselves, like i have been doing for years. i gotta change, so should you. peace