YALL DONT LOL TO HARD BUT HERE SOMETHING I WAS DOING

[THACRITIC408]

I KNOW I SUCK BUT I JUST WANTED TO POST THESE SO YALL COULD PEEP

 

[V]

The second one aint bad...your font color is too close to the rest of the color scheme...make it stand out some how and also try using block letters to get a better look until you get better at it and then fuck wit crazier fonts...

 

[Defy]

I like the background of the second one alot....but I didn't like the spray effect behind "tha critic"....same with what sikhmade said, make the fonts stand out more.


and lol @ "don't lol too hard".....you know you've been on the internet too long if you use lol as a noun in a sentence :classic:

 

[SMOKE1230]

#2 aint bad, you know what they say, practice makes perfect. Keep at it big homie..........

 

[THACRITIC408]

lmfaoooooooo@defy ahhahah i just wanted to try thanks for the feed back yall im finda try all the things yall told me to see if i can step it up little by little

 

[underground]

LOL...they aint that bad. practice makes perfect!

 

[TaxMan]

#2 aint bad, you know what they say, practice makes perfect. Keep at it big homie..........

The second one would be a dope painting. If you are into classical art. You could put a lot of expression and feeling into it with brush strokes etc.

 

[TAKIN NO SHORTZ]

that movie was good;
I like the second.