new song im writing. only one complete verse so far. any feedback is always appreciated.
i walk the road less travelled and ive been baffled for years/
constant confusion causin catostrophical fears/
darkness shattered the light and took over my soul/
death stays close and follows everywhere that i go/
but where do we go when we get to the end/
could i ever be forgiven for all of my sins/
close friends become enemies at the blink of an eye/
but ive done so much damage to myself i dont think i can die/
why am i here is the question i ask/
i should be dead and gone from all the shit in my past/
bodies hittin the grass, another drive-by in the night/
mothers screamin and cryin cause her son just died in a fight/
its a constant struggle to stay alive in this world we live in/
cant abide by the rules, corrupted cold killas keep sinnin/
spinnin in circles, feel like im lost in a maze/
blazin the purples keeps my mind lost in a haze/
my days have been dark, my mind posessed by the shadows/
cause god dumped me off in a stream inside a boat wit no paddles
i walk the road less travelled and ive been baffled for years/
constant confusion causin catostrophical fears/
darkness shattered the light and took over my soul/
death stays close and follows everywhere that i go/
but where do we go when we get to the end/
could i ever be forgiven for all of my sins/
close friends become enemies at the blink of an eye/
but ive done so much damage to myself i dont think i can die/
why am i here is the question i ask/
i should be dead and gone from all the shit in my past/
bodies hittin the grass, another drive-by in the night/
mothers screamin and cryin cause her son just died in a fight/
its a constant struggle to stay alive in this world we live in/
cant abide by the rules, corrupted cold killas keep sinnin/
spinnin in circles, feel like im lost in a maze/
blazin the purples keeps my mind lost in a haze/
my days have been dark, my mind posessed by the shadows/
cause god dumped me off in a stream inside a boat wit no paddles
