WELL I WORKED VERY HARD ON THIS.. NEW TRACK FINALLY UP!!!

[Pak Dan]

I HOPE Y'ALL LIKE MY NEW TRACK I BEEN PUTTIN IN A LOTTA WORK IN IT AND I HOPE THE RESULTS R WORTH IT...

listen 2 the whole thing cuz imo, i think my 2nd verse is the best.. the 3rd one is good too. the 1st verse aint too bad but it sound a lil less blended in mainly b/c of da fact that when we were doubling it on da 1st verse, i couldnt hear myself in da headphones so yea.. juss 2 let ya kno that.

listen 2 the end skit too. its pretty funny.. there r sound effects in da begginning of my 2nd verse..

the 1st skit i did w/ my producer was like hella serious in da beginning and whatnot and after we finished.. we started bursting out laughin... anyways...


A LOTTA MY HOMIES LIKED THIS SONG A LOT SO I HOPE Y'ALL DO TOO...




LEAVE FEEDBACK IF U'D LIKE...








NEXT TRACK COMING IN OCTOBER...













anddd uhh.... dont pay no mind to the That Girl song...hehe









PEACE

http://www.myspace.com/itzlildan

 

[chris capo]

lol

 

[Pak Dan]

does anyone like it?? lol

 

[Reegz]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oPJOPWwgDkQ

 

[chris capo]

LMAO

 

[Pak Dan]

lol

 

[Pak Dan]

BUMP

 

[coondogg26]

it aint horrible, but that That Girl song is boo boo, it sounds like u got a dick in ur mouth. For real tho y you sound so weird on that track?

 

[AllCityDAO]

you sound like your trying to talk without a tongue or your just half retarted, one of em

 

[Pak Dan]

coondogg~ lol i SAID pay no mind 2 it..



well 1st things 1st, well, it was rushed.. so that may be a case. i had 2 finish both songs cuz i was gonna be busy da whole month an couldnt go 2 da studio.. umm my mouth was HELLA dry cuz i was fasting and i had just spent a couple hrs recordin Smoke This..


so yea..sorry bout that. it was 4 this one beezy whom i liked 4 like 2 yrs..

 

[Pak Dan]

you sound like your trying to talk without a tongue or your just half retarted, one of em

hmm.. i'll c wut i can do bout that..

 

[AllCityDAO]

i take that back it sounds like your mouth is wired shut and half retarded

 

[Toro]

Sounding hella Haji Springer-pre puberty.

 

[coondogg26]

i just listened to it again and i just started to laugh this time, its pretty bad dogg. Its sounds like this http://youtube.com/watch?v=cMhQlmtrhls

 

[Dr.Pillpopper]

ITS DECENT. I'VE HEARD WORSE. GOOD AS A HOBBY RAP.

 

[MzCiN]

lmfao poor lil dan im bout to peep it lets c

 

[MzCiN]

its not too bad but yea ur voice sounds wierd.. like it was said before.

 

[cheeto]

i just listened to it again and i just started to laugh this time, its pretty bad dogg. Its sounds like this http://youtube.com/watch?v=cMhQlmtrhls

holly shit! lmao!!!
is this foreal? hahahhaha

 

[Latin Boss]

you sound like you choking on something.

 

[Pak Dan]

lol jeez thanks for the *constructive critism* i'll get better for sure...



good thing a lotta ppl around my area like it...






i'll get better no doubt... my producer says everytime i hop out of his studio, i get even better each time