Weak Spit I did

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Feb 12, 2003
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In Ma hood the only way you could get yo words out was in Graffitti
Ya Try 'n speek yo mind 'n homies pull out Gunz so big - it was like dey made from acme
Stack D's - I got a dolla stack to da sky - Man Bullet's rickashey ova' a homies head
Look back 'n fire - Man I thought you was a bro's ally?
There aint noone you could trust 'n ya life - I got two homies - 'n they my dice
Anotha located at ma waist - A 9 mili heater - Thug Beater - Takin the Life of a Thug Breather
Thug's see her - Then they on da floo'a second later

Catored by a hollow tip - Then a platnium Grit -
Man ma teeth bitin harder then a pit - Virgin bitches aint even seen there own clit
Pullin out their Insides - I mean shit - Brotha Lynch Said it better
"Cant live witout da Sick"
I got this rap game to rememba' ma name
It's like it's stained wit' permiment marka' all up in their brain
I came wit heat in da battle's - so many bitches rydin ma dick I had to rent out saddles /
wit a pocket full of cash - 'n a pipe full of hash - I make shit happen
when im done i leave so much blood it's beyond one napkin

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Wishin to die - Side By Side wit ma maker - God im givin up my soul are you a taker?/
Posted up on da cross to die - Me - Im posted up on a cloud in da sky /
But the soul remains on the contrete surounded in chalk /
Where my foot's outlined thats where I took my last walk /
and where you see ma skull skethced out - thats where a homie talked his last talk /
'n where the hands are - thats the last time I held my mother /
I left the house - neva' thinkin I should have said "I love you" to my brother /
Neva knew that I shouldnt have had that arguement last night with my dad /
Neva' knew the last time my family and friends would see me would be in a black bag /
The Last time I'd be sittin down there'd be a toe~tag - sayin me name and date of birth /
Well Now Im laid in the hurse - Wood over my body /
I thought that If I were to die defendin the game - I'd be burried wit a shottie /
But instead I'd be shot wit a tommie - 'n 6 feet under /
Spendin the rest ma life wit da sound of silence 'n occasionaly thunder /
If I could turn around what would I do diffrent? /
I wouldnt have spakred that first joint - Wouldnt have reached for ma first hollow~point /
Took ma first shot - Shot ma first Shot - Caught by the first Cop /

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It sounds good lyricaly.. Trust me I jus spit it.. But the text is nothin special.. and i did this a lil while ago.. Recycled some old spits.. Anways I should have the song up on ma soundclick page real soon.
 
Apr 15, 2003
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Yo.....I dunt like the Gangsta Theme cuzz....
Even though its your style of writing and shit you gotta be more realistic....Write a song expressin all your emotions or soemthing, and before that download an Aesop Rock song from kazaa caleld 6B Panaroma and peep that style....that'll give you an idea of having a song not set in gangsta rap, but in real life rap...

But still Much Love and keep droppin em...
~1ne~
 
Feb 12, 2003
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I know this spit's weak.. I have writers block @ the moment.. Jus' posted this to keep ma spits updated (I used to post verses each minute LOL) didnt want you guy's thinkin im quitin.

CrossCountry
 
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KODOGG said:
Tha Master MC agree's wit' da rest of da board..
LOL The Master MC says you are correct!

Well now that i read it i think i like that shit personally. If you recorded that shit it would probably come out tight. Over a raw beat. There's that my REAL opinion.