wats crackin in the flows board....

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Apr 25, 2002
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havent been on siccness for a min... peep my new verse i been writin


your arrival in this earth, cursed by your main rival-
hard times come and go, stay strong for survival-
You will hate your life, saying your a waste of your parents creation-
With determination, you will escape your suicidal situation-
your mind and a weapon are an association, try to overtake that combination-
Scars on the rist, anticipation of needing a blood donation-
Dont let no one put you down, control your destination-
Ending your life aint a vacation, Dying aint a celebration-
Thoughts of death are scary, time to start a new foundation-
Stay alive and overcome bullshit, hell or heaven should not be your location-
you rather be alive, no priest having to do narrations-
Rest in Peace is not communication, its sad information-
Speaking Dictation, live a wonderful life with selfpirde-
Dont let others guide you to suicide-
I seen my homies cry, family members die-
Walking in your own shoes, Take ya own stride-
Speakin my life with flows, this shit happens worldwide-

the track is about suicidal and decisions you make in life... the track is called "decisions"
 
Apr 25, 2002
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Good job BIGGZ, this has gotta be one of your best flows in my opinion. I just think you ran a little far with that same rhyme. I still think it's good and I changed my mind about when I told you that you should change it. Just let that shit flow.
 
May 28, 2002
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crackin in the no flows board..

cant quite think.. my pink eyes cant blink~
taken for granted too long, now the vital parts of hate is gone~
stuck with nothing much so i~
continue on as a soldier of mis fortune~
turning at every corner as to avoid some things im not so proud~
matter of factly, the person ive become, i loathe~
but ive keept on as him, until i get the chance to release an orgasmic phantaism~
as a beast with a brittle body, the strength of a monster~
and teeth like a dragons~
flame proof, cuzz i have no choice~

ive left.. you incomplete.. dont hate me.. lol... does this even rhyme?

lmao
 
Jun 4, 2002
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human nature forged in failure unavoidable like inferno ashes dripping from a Vietnamese sailor/hatred is a must,guns bust,memory's vanish in the dust/the life of man demands lust, universal soldiers pass out in god we still trust/area 51 was born, then disapears in a dust storm/
crimson tides invite deadly lines that confine my mind,encrypted signs deactivate timez/ that captured humanity,incapable of sanity,mothered by the opposite that landed me/anger fuiled me, the reflection that abandoned me/ led to my insanity...............