Verse To a Song

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KODOGG

KODOGG

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This is a Verse to a song im workin on..

I live Life like a "Pacafist Eatin Dinner" in a "Peacefull-Manner" //
But the Government Result to Deceitfull-Slander to trick they own people //
Some Seak-The-Truth about our real lifes //
About how 12 year old kids dispapearing like "Wisdom Teeth" bein blown out by Nines //
'n at times.. Ladies usin Babies against they own husbands //
While Drugs bein Sold by the Dimes-N-Dozzens //
Homies Plugg-in Homies 'n Scandalous-Ways //
The Police Doin' worse things then the Crooks-They-Chase //
Criminals Using Money As Baint to corrupt young seeds //
Kidnappin-Babies 'n Rapin-Laides, This worlds Gon' To Chaos //
Dad's going home proud, then get laid-off //
Lose they home because they aint got cash to pay-off they debts-'n-bills //
Parents grew up rich, Dont Know How they Kid Feels when he need's cash he jus steals //


Drop yo' 2 cents.
 
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CURT B

Sicc OG
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May 21, 2002
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its aight..it seems rushed cuz after like 2/3's of the verse it jumps to that job ting and shit..jus work on transition a lil and it'll be cool.
 
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CURT B

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May 21, 2002
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aye bro from hearin ur audios and shit u need be re-recordin ur songs that r already written over and over again fuckin wit different styles. to me ya style now and voice aint that poppin. a good way to get ya true feelins and voice out is ta record ya shit while lookin at a verse and then get on a cd and listen to it over and over again til u memorize that shit and then jus let yo emotions take over ur voice and fuck all the tryin ta sound tight, let it come natural..once u find some shit thats cool then u should start writin new songs..also, the beats i heard u on aint that ill..i see u live in concord, hit me up on a pm and i'll hook u up wit my homeboy, this fool got the illest beats i've heard round these parts..he live up in danville..holla at me on pm and i'll give u his number and shit..one
 
KODOGG

KODOGG

Sicc OG
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Feb 12, 2003
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I feel you Curt, Chea.. I was fuccin wit this guy my bro laced me up, but he was sorta hard to keep track with.. Now my homie is laceing me up wit some tight beat's for free, but i gotta see more of his beat's to see what he has to offer, 'n Curt i feel you 100%.. Latley i been jumpin into them freeestyle battles more often, so im learnin that natural flow.. And I've recorded a few songs i aint posted no where besides on a CD ive got where it's jus me flowin acapella, some freestyles, some of verses I memorized.. I now usualy memorize the verse, memorize the Bar's of the beat.. Then spit that verse like 20 times over the beat trieing to match it up.. Make adjustments, memorize the verse all over again, and then repeat.. Curt, if you could hook me up wit some sample's of this guy's beat's i'd be more then willin to hit 'em up.. Like I said, Im usualy gettin 2 beat's for $50.00 or free beat's from a begener.. And i also got a hook on mix+masterin for about $15.00's.. Hit me up on PM wit a price checc and some samples foo'.. I'd be willin to fork out some $$ for some knockin beats! If he lives in Danville that's coo too.. I used to spend alot of time there when i lived wit Grandma when i was like 5 lol..
 
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