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[Pak Dan]

LEMME KNO WUT U GUYS THINK OF IT..

I WORKED PRETTY HARD ON IT AND WHATNOT..

ITS PRODUCED BY INDECENT THE SLAPMASTER..PROPS 2 HIM



LETS HEAR THE FEEDBACK..





HTTP://MYSPACE.COM/ITZLILDAN

 

[DFresh77]

Dave Chapelle: OKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

 

[:ab:]

nathaniel

 

[DankedOut707]

HONESTLY, U SUCK. LOL U RAPPIN BOUT WEAPONS, RIDIN ON SUCKAS AND SHIT. YOUR A SPOILED INDIAN KID. PLUS ITS HARD TO UNDERSTAND ANYTHING U SAYING CUZ YOUR BRACES AND PROBABLY CUZ THE WAY U TALK. U ALSO RAP OFF BEAT

 

[0594_1Q]

damn kids still dreaming about becoming a rapper. get a real job

 

[5ive1en]

HONESTLY, U SUCK. LOL U RAPPIN BOUT WEAPONS, RIDIN ON SUCKAS AND SHIT. YOUR A SPOILED INDIAN KID. PLUS ITS HARD TO UNDERSTAND ANYTHING U SAYING CUZ YOUR BRACES AND PROBABLY CUZ THE WAY U TALK. U ALSO RAP OFF BEAT

Why don't you tell him how you REALLY feel? Let's not hold back here..

 

[Syko Sniper]

HONESTLY, U SUCK. LOL U RAPPIN BOUT WEAPONS, RIDIN ON SUCKAS AND SHIT. YOUR A SPOILED INDIAN KID. PLUS ITS HARD TO UNDERSTAND ANYTHING U SAYING CUZ YOUR BRACES AND PROBABLY CUZ THE WAY U TALK. U ALSO RAP OFF BEAT

lol somebodies career just got ended

 

[Pak Dan]

lol thx for tha feedback 707, im still improving...


and i aint spoiled bruh.. i gotta work for a lotta shit (im paki lol)

 

[FDS]

^^^ stop lying dan, u know ur dad has stake in some crazy oil company.

 

[FDS]

but u do know that people in the open forum know about BART right?

 

[HIM]

Why don't you tell him how you REALLY feel? Let's not hold back here..

lol...

As long as ur doing this rapping stuff as a hobby then I think ur ok..if you're expecting to eat off this then..:hurt:

Then again, if Soilja Boy can make it then maybe you could to..u take urself too serious..make up a dance or something...that "hardcore" image isnt working for you...goodluck anyway man..

 

[VSTXDJ]

DAMN BLOOD YOU SHOULD GIVE INDECENT THE BEAT BACK AND HAVE THEM USE IT FOR SOMETHING THATS DOESN'T SUCK ASS

 

[Skizzy Ske]

keep doin it lil dan.

 

[Kix209]

you need to change the topics you rap about because you and i know you aint a gangsta, be yourself lil homie..

 

[M BUTCHER 206]

ahaha smoking weed and hallucinating and laying in a bathtub

you sure you didnt smoke pcp

 

[thatguy]

^ lol @ weed hallucinations, that shit was laced for sure

 

[X_KaLiBa]

if you were rapping about fighting fences and benchpressing your shit would be a hit

 

[BAYTION WIDE]

ahaha smoking weed and hallucinating and laying in a bathtub

you sure you didnt smoke pcp

lol

 

[Toro]

You sure you're not Haji's kid? Anyways you sound kinda liked Greased Up Deaf Guy from Family Guy, maybe the braces tho.

 

[Toro]

And also I'm sorry but I saw this on your page and had to post it:

.....wow, basically any cool bay area kid right now huh? haha.
-Small backpack meant for a 1st grader, check.
-Throwing up the T, check.
-vans, check.