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Apr 8, 2005
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#1
heres a lil sumthin ima try to get recorded soon, got a beat and everything, got two verses done, ima have my homie top it all off with a third verse, shits gon be tight i think, tell me yut honest thoughts and opinions, no hating, and whatever constructive critism yall got, thats cool, its always good to hear both sides of it ya know



verse 1
some soldeirs are taken, left down in a grave, some fucked up, they liven in a federal cage, but either way, we all lost the ones we extol, wheather their incarcerated or god took life as a whole, the pain is amplified when times are eminently hard, and sometimes it can leave us so emotionally scarred, cause we all goin crazy, our visions impared, innocent blood coverin city streets has got us all scared, thats why we gotta look back, learn from the error of our mistakes, cause a commitment to change sometimes is all it takes, but so many bitchs in this game, just some phonys and fakes so i dont know what to do ....... cause they kill the realla ones, and the ones that we love, at least they're outta this hell, and they restin above, this goes out to any homie who aint here on this day, all i can think to say, rest in peace, get at you again some day




verse 2
all thats left is memmories thats released from the soul, commenced to melodies, cause this fuckin world is so cold, i know a couple people ..... one died by a slug, the other stabbed to death ..... straight murdered in cold blood, fools actin crazy, disregardin 25 to life, either they pressin they luck, or it never crossed they mind, they livin blind, not knowin nothin bout doin time, just killin these kids, 17s too young to die, am i right, and all because they wanna be thugs, theyll shotgun yur ass over couple ounces of drugs, or theyll use weapons to handle what they cant with they fists, cant handle a fight? how the fuck you gon handle this? judge makes his verdict, you doin years behing bars, victims family is left with reminicent mental scars, i know its hard, but we all gotta press on, think about the ones you miss while you hearin this song, c'mon.



ima let the beat play through the hook, gives people a chance to sit and think about whats just been said, once my homie gets a verse on this, ill post it.
 
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#5
one person given me some feedback, cmon now people, its cool though, sleep all you want, i bet yall gon flip when u hear the audio though
 
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#13
i got a gang of beats i can show you, so just write yur verse and shit, if we need to slow the beat down or speed it up to fit, then we will, ive had to do that shit before