u live life

[Furio]

You live life,
Like everything's alright,
Until one night,
Everything's not in plain sight
Then you search for answers
And wonder why one day you might get cancer
Or die of AIDS
Or get shot in the brain
Or die of lonliness, or suffer eternal pain
There's only hate in this world
And no one can thrive
I awake each morning, hoping to die
They say I have my whole life ahead,
Why live as I do?
They don't know me, they don't walk in my shoes
You live to die, You live to cry
Deep thoughts run in my mind
ANd give me a spiritual high
But no light for my eyes
People judging others
Brother against brother
I can't change the world,
When I myself can not change
My heart filled with love
But coruptted by rage
I wish for the better
But I continue to sin
I must confess, but I don't know where to begin



there u go ppl. tell me what u think. i just want to tell ppl that u cant trust no1. if u live with trust, u live in pain. thats the way my life is goin.

 

[x-kalibur]

real talk.. seems deep.. I liked the whole concept of it, good shit furio..

 

[Cmoke]

i felt that shit...nice hit

 

[Deuce]

In a Word.....Horrible...Way I Cee it is if I ever heard that behind a beat I'd either laugh or cry..Mixed emtions if you will.
Sorry Furio....Not this time cuzzo


Deuce 2 C's

 

[Furio]

its not a flow its a poem, and how can u judge flows or poems?? its from the heart and it means somethin to the writer

 

[Fawg]

Can't say they are nice thoughts Furio, I've felt some of those ways myself at times. I didn't enjoy em, and moved on with them in my life with them for awhile. But I found other better things to take their place. Like good friends, all sittin back Cmokin blunts.

~Fawg

 

[Cmoke]

Cmokin blunts.

~Fawg

Heh...

 

[D-Locc60]

THUMBS UP

.

 

[Psilo707]

Deuce youve GOT to be joking. Anyone who cant tell thats a poem, and NOT a flow, has to be on some serious brain damage shit...

 

[Furio]

yo guys thanks for the replies, i figured out a long time ago that i couldnt flow so i write poetry. its not award winning but it helps me deal with my feelings. everything is just going so wrong in my life the last year. its the worst year ever, since like september 2001 til now. i dont know when its gonna be better. i hope its soon cuz im bout to lose it, seriously. i got suicidal thoughts, no lies! im just so confused about everything. peace