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EDJ

EDJ

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May 3, 2002
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gOOD WORK AS ALWAYS. ONLY THANg I WOULD CHANgE IS THE LEgIBILITY OF SOME OF THE WORDS(SOME CLASH CAUSE OF THE FADE OR THE LIgHT). BUT IT'S A MATTER OF TASTE(AS IN YOUR CASE).
 
EDJ

EDJ

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THE HARDEST ONE OF ALL IF N-E( AND LIKE I SAID, IT MIgHT BE A MATTER OF TASTE) IS THE "W" IN THE WORD"SCREWSHOP". IT gETS BLINDED AT THE BOTTOM BY THE LIgHT.
THE "T" AND THE "N" IN THE WORD "TOSIN"(AgAIN, YOU MIgHT'VE DID IT ON PURPOSE FOR EFFECT PURPOSES) FADE OUT WITH THE LIgHTIN' EFFECT LEAVIN' THE "O", "S", AND "I" STICCIN' OUT. TO ME, THE WHOLE WORD "TOSIN" SHOULD BE STICCIN' OUT. AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST, I KNOW FOR A FACT YOU DID IT ON PURPOSE, BUT I WOULD TWEAK THAT LETTER "A"(MOVE IT A TAD BIT TO THE LEFT) ON THE WORD "YA" THAT'S gOIN' INTO THE ARM/ARM PIT. LIKE THAT LETTER C BARELY gETTIN' COVERED BY THE HEAD, I BELIEVE THAT'S HOW YOU WOULD WANT THE FONTS TO BE COVERED, JUST ENOUgH, BUT NOT TO WHERE IF YOU DON'T KNOW, YOU MIgHT HAVE TO XND gUESS.

THAT'S IT PLAYA. YOU DID IT AgAIN.
 
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EDJ said:
THE HARDEST ONE OF ALL IF N-E( AND LIKE I SAID, IT MIgHT BE A MATTER OF TASTE) IS THE "W" IN THE WORD"SCREWSHOP". IT gETS BLINDED AT THE BOTTOM BY THE LIgHT.
THE "T" AND THE "N" IN THE WORD "TOSIN"(AgAIN, YOU MIgHT'VE DID IT ON PURPOSE FOR EFFECT PURPOSES) FADE OUT WITH THE LIgHTIN' EFFECT LEAVIN' THE "O", "S", AND "I" STICCIN' OUT. TO ME, THE WHOLE WORD "TOSIN" SHOULD BE STICCIN' OUT. AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST, I KNOW FOR A FACT YOU DID IT ON PURPOSE, BUT I WOULD TWEAK THAT LETTER "A"(MOVE IT A TAD BIT TO THE LEFT) ON THE WORD "YA" THAT'S gOIN' INTO THE ARM/ARM PIT. LIKE THAT LETTER C BARELY gETTIN' COVERED BY THE HEAD, I BELIEVE THAT'S HOW YOU WOULD WANT THE FONTS TO BE COVERED, JUST ENOUgH, BUT NOT TO WHERE IF YOU DON'T KNOW, YOU MIgHT HAVE TO XND gUESS.

THAT'S IT PLAYA. YOU DID IT AgAIN.
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lol whats wrong with your "g" ?
 
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