THE NEW CUT: Tadou -- "Eyes Closed, No Pulse"...

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BAMMER

Siccness Gray Hair
#2
Apr 25, 2002
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www.dawgman.com
#2
first and foremost,I dislike you

You have a unique enough voice for me to listen to you,so that's a plus.Your lyrics and metaphors are good in my opinion,and your smart enough to be an above average rapper lyrically.You do lose the beat at the begining of the hook,which is unforgivable because the beat is slower than a caucasian snail.The beat is absolutely horrific,seriously.Your better than alot of the MP3 artists on here as an M.C.,but I could top that beat with a pencil and a tamborine.good luck

:dead:
 
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MR.VILLAIN

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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i didnt dig the beat.........

I like the metaphors though tadpole...........you need to hit up sho down or someone like that for ya beats......i think the delivery is off like bammer said,but that can be fixed......all in all you are pretty tight,keep pursuing your dream.....you definitley got talent,unlike khevlar
 
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Night Shield

On the Rise
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Apr 25, 2002
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Lyrics was nice, I think you have a tight "rap voice" but the flow needs to be worked on a little bit and better beats would be better, this beat made me wanna tear my ears from my head, lol. But this is the best cut I've heard so far. Keep it up!!:beard:
 
tadou

tadou

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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#7
Damn, if i was gassed up before, think of what i am now, hahahaha... :classic: Thanks for the props, y'all, i 'preciate them shits...its always cool to know exactly what you need to change or work on, ya dig? FourPlay Studio Vol 1, thats the fundraiser...Vol 2 is gonna blow ya melon off!!

If anybody else got any tracks to put up....make a thread...and ill give yall some reviews too....100
 
Cranky

Cranky

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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I wasn't really feelin' ya delivery or your voice. Your lyrics were pretty cool, but I just couldn't feel the way you spit, or the beat you spit over. Looks like others are feelin' your shit, but I can't....Maybe I'll feel some of your other shit though.....
 
Mr. D-Sane

Mr. D-Sane

Sicc OG, muthafucka
#11
Apr 25, 2002
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www.streetlevelrecords.com
#11
Yeah.....that beat is pretty weak. I'll tell you how to make the song better.

#1. You need a little faster beat......

#2. Do some "hype tracks"......I assume you know what those are, right? It will add some flavor to your verses and make it more "active."

#3. Put a little more feeling into your vocals.....they're a little monotonous. Sound more confident.
 
tadou

tadou

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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#13
Cranky--its all cool, i know what you mean...i write in lots of styles, that one was a "stunted" flow (partially offbeat, no "true" flow), but maybe you'll like somethin else i put up!!

feben, gracias!

-TiM C-, MacGuinn -- the beat needs to be made-over a bit, yeah, i agree...it was computer-made, so it isnt as perfected as it could be.

Mr. D-Sane -- this song, total, was about 10 days in the making...i mostly just wanted somethin heated to put up, ya dig? I had the verses mostly memorized, but they still took me a handfull of takes each. Anyways, those are some great ideas, im gonna have to try em out!

Overall, im gettin the feelin y'all are likin this track, but agree that it needs brushing up...good shit! Going back to the drawing board is difficult, but knowing exactly what to change with a track is very helpful! I am forever endebtted to you all for your generous gestures and benevolent tidings...or some shit like that :confused: haha...

Starting this Thursday, im gonna go back and re-record some of my emotionless/weaker tracks...ill keep yall updated......and again, big ups on the reviews! you have no idea how much my frail ego needed this :cool:
 
mo-x

mo-x

Sicc OG
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May 4, 2002
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www.unknownterritoryrecords.com
#18
^ that fucker xzibit debuted on the west coast charts like that, and got like 10 plays for a couple days and then his third day got over 1,000 plays and now he's #1 stomping me right off the charts. god damn fucker nutz. how the hell do these cats get the plays? it's not because he's xzibit either, because syko stayed #1 for hella... ARG(#*$
 
tadou

tadou

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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#19
^^^..Word to that, that shit is straight BS!
We need to start spamming the SHIT out of all these huge boards like RapMusic.Com, FreeStyling.com, etc.., and let em know that the NW got heat!! Im down!!! :eek:
 
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YOUNG KRIME

Sicc OG
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Aug 27, 2002
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My P-O wanna U-A What should i do yall

This is what i'm stressing in my song if you never heard it check me out it is real hot.This beat is by a top seattle music producer named Stew With me(Young Krime and my homie C-rain)YOU GOT TO SLUMP THIS BECAUSE IT CRACKS AND THE LYRICS ARE RIDIN.
http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/175/ghetto_baby.html

Can yall help me get this song on the charts by downloading it for free. Thank you.
GB
 
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