The coming of "Black Super Man" - by Ugly Nigga

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Ugly Nigga (The Coming of Black Super Man)

1st verse:

When they Bay Area needed a hero, I dressed up/

After the Hyphy movement the Bay was, messed up/

Sellers sold out quick just tah get checks cut/

Clown niggas, jokers and jesters, dumb investors/

Young impressions, swagger jackin someones essence/

"Mix Tape" bullshit, should come in question/

The "Old Bay went away" turned gay the next day/

The clowns are in town for the Circus Olay/

Enter, the dark skinned, Clark Kent/

Super hero and part pimp/

Wit Fity-thou in the car compart-ment/

Narcotics in the apartment under the carpet/

Thizz face Nigga!...That don't work/

Skinny jeans Nigga!...I don't jerk/

U-g-l-y Nigga!...That's my shirt/

You can see me flyin' when I,... pass by earth/

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Ugly Nigga Attributes:

Stay on topic 10

Rhyme pattern 8

Metaphors 4

Word linkage 9

Original subject matter 10

X Factor: The ability to project visual pictures with words, story telling.

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2nd Verse:

You can kind of tell the YaY, just, fell away/

It was a mellow day, on that yella "K"/

special bus ridin by bails of hey/

Old man white truck with the trailor gray/

When the meteor hit, it, blazed the day/

Out ah tha smoke appeared the Black Sup, in a bad coupe/

Inside the meteor, see half the booth/

Glowin' green micro phone- in the grass loop/

Small Ville vs Trill Ville /

Black Sup spit ill enough tah Kill Bill/

Place that "S" in front of the steel grill/

Lamb on the seats, it feels real/

Black Lois on the cape, rockin the teel heels/

An you on my jock, confused- hopin I stop/

That hyphy you was on lost focus and dropped/

I remember Felix Mitchelle had it sowed (sewn) up an locked/

I remember Too Short that's when Oakland was hot/

Then out came this wack shit, now I don't even notice my spot/



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The Hip Hop World was taken by the sav way that Black Luther had convinced the hardest place in the world the all might Bay Area to go STUPID DUMB and build Hyphy City. Luckily Ugly Nigga aka Black Super Man put and end to the none since and crushed his evil plans. Now a new problem has arisen...



3rd Verse:


I aint from L. A. but I rock it with Kryptonians/

Rocket from Kryptonia, Metroplis, California/

Sem City!, Gotham and Lower Bottoms!/

Harlem got the projects sprawlin/

Peep the "S" on the bullet proof chest "who wan' test?"/

When the .50 spray, richotte, niggas loose ah clip ah day/

Evergreen Cemitary breh, you just ah trip away/

My archrival Lex Luther, the Meth user/

Best P.E.D.s producer, got the FEDS ta shoot cha/

Even the dreads ah do yah, machete head removers/

-Architect of the Hyphy movement/

Hear how that music is?,these fools is loosin' it/

you is to if you doin it, the Bay just ruined it/

The Village People is what they're music influence is/

Black Super Man fam, yah I kilt that/

Smashed to the ground so they neva rebuild that/

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Special note: No offense to the various genres of rap that we have in the Bay. We all we got... Ugly Nigga...I Put That On My Life.




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The clowns are in town for the Circus Olay/
Ok what the fuck is that? I googled olay and it's a cosmetic products maker, for women.



So they have a circus now? Or did you mean Cirque De Soleil? Spellcheck and google are you friend man.
 
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2nd Verse: Ugly Nigga takes action

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2nd Verse:

You can kind of tell the YaY, just, fell away/

It was a mellow day, on that yella "K"/

special bus ridin by bails of hey/

Old man white truck with the trailor gray/

When the meteor hit, it, blazed the day/

Out ah tha smoke appeared the Black Sup, in a bad coupe/

Inside the meteor, see half the booth/

Glowin' green micro phone- in the grass loop/

Small Ville vs Trill Ville /

Black Sup spit ill enough tah Kill Bill/

Place that "S" in front of the steel grill/

Lamb on the seats, it feels real/

Black Lois on the cape, rockin the teel heels/

An you on my jock, confused- hopin I stop/

That hyphy you was on lost focus and dropped/

I remember Felix Mitchelle had it sowed (sewn) up an locked/

I remember Too Short that's when Oakland was hot/

Then out came this wack shit, now I don't even notice my spot/

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Mar 18, 2008
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This thread has hella laughs. But on a serious note I shouldn't have to read a song.
You don't read music sheets? I feel you, and I see your point you ah beat maker so you wanna hear the accompaning track to the lyrics. This just me pre-preppin'. Gettin my Hip-Hop quotables together. Ugly Nigga- The Greatest Entertainer the Bay Area has ever seen/ The Greatest Rapper it has ever heard.
 

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Ugly Nigga (The Coming of Black Super Man)

Ugly Nigga Attributes:

Stay on topic 10

Rhyme pattern 8

Metaphors 4

Word linkage 9

Original subject matter 10

X Factor: The ability to project visual pictures with words, story telling.

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LOL
 
Mar 18, 2008
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3rd Final Verse: Ugly Nigga lryically destroys the Movement

The Hip Hop World was taken by the sav way that Black Luther had convinced the hardest place in the world, the all might Bay Area to go STUPID DUMB and build Hyphy City. Luckily Ugly Nigga aka Black Super Man put and end to the nonsince and crushed his evil plans. Now a new problem has arisen...

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3rd Verse:


I aint from L. A. but I rock it with Kryptonians/

Rocket from Kryptonia, Metroplis, California/

Sem City!, Gotham and Lower Bottoms!/

Harlem got the projects sprawlin/

Peep the "S" on the bullet proof chest "who wan' test?"/

When the .50 spray, richotte, niggas loose ah clip ah day/

Evergreen Cemitary breh, you just ah trip away/

My archrival Lex Luther, the Meth user/

Best P.E.D.s producer, got the FEDS ta shoot cha/

Even the dreads ah do yah, machete head removers/

-Architect of the Hyphy movement/

Hear how that music is?,these fools is loosin' it/

you is to if you doin it, the Bay just ruined it/

The Village People is what they're music influence is/

Black Super Man fam, yah I kilt that/

Smashed to the ground so they neva rebuild that/

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Special note: No offense to the various genres of rap that we have in the Bay. We all we got... Ugly Nigga...I Put That On My Life.



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^^^ what are your attributes for the 3rd verse? x-factor?
3rd Verse: Rating

Ugly Nigga (The Coming of Black Super Man)

Ugly Nigga Attributes:

Stay on topic 10

Rhyme pattern 9

Metaphors 6

Word linkage 9

Original subject matter 7

X Factor: Providing humor while still maintaining a tight flow.

Best Lyrical moment:

I aint from L. A. but I rock it with Kryptonians/

Rocket from Kryptonia, Metroplis, California/

Sem City!, Gotham and Lower Bottoms!/

Harlem got the projects sprawlin/


Hit me back on your numbers even if you think I deserve all "0" 's or "-1".