Text - Just like you

[Zer0.MediA]

 

[NoDollazNoSense]

messy

 

[Essqubed]

Unfortunately it looks like it was somewhat thrown together. The typography does not appear to be placed with any sort of calculation as to what it is going to do for the design. It appears more like it was thrown out there randomly & the opacity has just been changed along with the color here & there. I won't comment on the drawing in the background towards the right. Don't let my comments stumble you...take it constructively & consider it when you begin working on your next design.

Regards

 

[Villain]

I fully agree...You got too many styles being thrown together, it ditracts from the words that are being said...maybe the idea was use a bunch of different fonts, but the colors still throw off the overall apeal of the piece...

 

[Zer0.MediA]

Yeah I know.. the shit's fuckin' wack. By the time I got done with the girl, I really didn't feel like doin' the text and that's how it came out.

::shrug::