Tell Me What Yall Think Of My First Flow ?

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Jul 3, 2002
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Aight Check dis This Is My first Time tryin dis shit so tell me what yall think of this quick flow , Im 15 years old (Mexican) Im from Tucson Arizona And tryin to Get Down Wit Dis Rap Shit !!!!!!




its tha ruthless assasin,crashin bombin on any muthafucka askin, for yo punk ass there wont be no lastin ,im a real fuckin G never hesitate on blastin, this mc is untouchable wit no flaws in the name,all those who step up gettin knocked out da frame, im the cause of this mess im tha vato 2 blame,i come real hard wit dis shit my style aint lame, before i bust its i a must i rolls and I toke, cause when im in battle i send my opponetts up in smoke, i take this gangsta shit real but the fakes is a joke, im spittin so fast my lryrics grip your throat, its best ya catch yo breath you might choke, so next time check the name before ya step 2 me loc !
 
Apr 26, 2002
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What's crackufunction gee?

To tell you the truth and nothin' but the truth...go back to the lab with your "not so original" rhymes. Sounds recycled, stereotypical. Put more of your personna into this and just a little sense into the sentence...no hatin', just honest...