The music was a bit too loud in the first part of the video. It's hard to listen to anybody talk on video when there is music blaring behind them.
Second (just a tip): To keep the viewer interested, it's always a good thing to show other footage & keep the audio going if you want what is being said to be in there. Rather than having one person talking for seven plus minutes. Honestly, on video that is rather boring.
And third, what is the point of the video? I see no structure, no story.