SuperManning -Chaos (feat. KC & Lil Bro)
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Super Manning, interesting name for yourself, I will glad review this track.
Instrumental- Kinda weak remix, above average but just doesnt come off as impressive..
Lyrics-
1st verse is rushed with very little lyrical creativity, dude just started rappin right? like last month? Dude does not sound like hes comfortable in the booth, very little confidence. he picked the easiest word to rap, and didnt take time to really practice or put together a cohesive verse with the hook
2nd verse - Dude has a kinda tight voice if he could just figure out how to deliver his lyrics on time with the beat. He's better than the first rapper, but still needs work. I hate hearing rappers with a good tone/pitch to their voice and then shitty delivery..
3rd verse - this guys thinks hes a demon with the vocal effect, that was lame in 95 and its lame now, few known how to use it correctly. 3 verses into this song and i still dont know what the fuck you are talkin about,I mean
is their a subject or did you guys just get together to try and make a bunch of words said fast rhyme together. I dont see what adheres each verse to the next or even provides a bridge to the hook.
What Ihear is 3 very inexperienced rapper trying to imitate something they heard or saw. This song has a decent beat, with a wack sample thrown in. Then 3 guys with 3 different verses and none impressed me unfortunately. Checked out your profile and your from Wyoming?
When did we give Wyoming electricity? I heard the word "nigga" used a few times?
I didnt know there were any black people there,still living at least. Most Blacks that came through Wyoming only hung out for awhile
from a tree before they were cut down by the klan and buried. Unless we just have a case of some white guys thinking its cool to use the word.
PShitski, Honestly young dude I think you need to find a new hobby because this rap shit aint cutting it. Maybe you should try being a choir boy or maybe a sign spinner.
in other words
Instrumental- Kinda weak remix, above average but just doesnt come off as impressive..
Lyrics-
1st verse is rushed with very little lyrical creativity, dude just started rappin right? like last month? Dude does not sound like hes comfortable in the booth, very little confidence. he picked the easiest word to rap, and didnt take time to really practice or put together a cohesive verse with the hook
2nd verse - Dude has a kinda tight voice if he could just figure out how to deliver his lyrics on time with the beat. He's better than the first rapper, but still needs work. I hate hearing rappers with a good tone/pitch to their voice and then shitty delivery..
3rd verse - this guys thinks hes a demon with the vocal effect, that was lame in 95 and its lame now, few known how to use it correctly. 3 verses into this song and i still dont know what the fuck you are talkin about,I mean
is their a subject or did you guys just get together to try and make a bunch of words said fast rhyme together. I dont see what adheres each verse to the next or even provides a bridge to the hook.
What Ihear is 3 very inexperienced rapper trying to imitate something they heard or saw. This song has a decent beat, with a wack sample thrown in. Then 3 guys with 3 different verses and none impressed me unfortunately. Checked out your profile and your from Wyoming?
When did we give Wyoming electricity? I heard the word "nigga" used a few times?
I didnt know there were any black people there,still living at least. Most Blacks that came through Wyoming only hung out for awhile
from a tree before they were cut down by the klan and buried. Unless we just have a case of some white guys thinking its cool to use the word.
PShitski, Honestly young dude I think you need to find a new hobby because this rap shit aint cutting it. Maybe you should try being a choir boy or maybe a sign spinner.
in other words
Super Manning, interesting name for yourself, I will glad review this track.
Instrumental- Kinda weak remix, above average but just doesnt come off as impressive..
Lyrics-
1st verse is rushed with very little lyrical creativity, dude just started rappin right? like last month? Dude does not sound like hes comfortable in the booth, very little confidence. he picked the easiest word to rap, and didnt take time to really practice or put together a cohesive verse with the hook
2nd verse - Dude has a kinda tight voice if he could just figure out how to deliver his lyrics on time with the beat. He's better than the first rapper, but still needs work. I hate hearing rappers with a good tone/pitch to their voice and then shitty delivery..
3rd verse - this guys thinks hes a demon with the vocal effect, that was lame in 95 and its lame now, few known how to use it correctly. 3 verses into this song and i still dont know what the fuck you are talkin about,I mean
is their a subject or did you guys just get together to try and make a bunch of words said fast rhyme together. I dont see what adheres each verse to the next or even provides a bridge to the hook.
What Ihear is 3 very inexperienced rapper trying to imitate something they heard or saw. This song has a decent beat, with a wack sample thrown in. Then 3 guys with 3 different verses and none impressed me unfortunately. Checked out your profile and your from Wyoming?
When did we give Wyoming electricity? I heard the word "nigga" used a few times?
I didnt know there were any black people there,still living at least. Most Blacks that came through Wyoming only hung out for awhile
from a tree before they were cut down by the klan and buried. Unless we just have a case of some white guys thinking its cool to use the word.
PShitski, Honestly young dude I think you need to find a new hobby because this rap shit aint cutting it. Maybe you should try being a choir boy or maybe a sign spinner.
in other words
Instrumental- Kinda weak remix, above average but just doesnt come off as impressive..
Lyrics-
1st verse is rushed with very little lyrical creativity, dude just started rappin right? like last month? Dude does not sound like hes comfortable in the booth, very little confidence. he picked the easiest word to rap, and didnt take time to really practice or put together a cohesive verse with the hook
2nd verse - Dude has a kinda tight voice if he could just figure out how to deliver his lyrics on time with the beat. He's better than the first rapper, but still needs work. I hate hearing rappers with a good tone/pitch to their voice and then shitty delivery..
3rd verse - this guys thinks hes a demon with the vocal effect, that was lame in 95 and its lame now, few known how to use it correctly. 3 verses into this song and i still dont know what the fuck you are talkin about,I mean
is their a subject or did you guys just get together to try and make a bunch of words said fast rhyme together. I dont see what adheres each verse to the next or even provides a bridge to the hook.
What Ihear is 3 very inexperienced rapper trying to imitate something they heard or saw. This song has a decent beat, with a wack sample thrown in. Then 3 guys with 3 different verses and none impressed me unfortunately. Checked out your profile and your from Wyoming?
When did we give Wyoming electricity? I heard the word "nigga" used a few times?
I didnt know there were any black people there,still living at least. Most Blacks that came through Wyoming only hung out for awhile
from a tree before they were cut down by the klan and buried. Unless we just have a case of some white guys thinking its cool to use the word.
PShitski, Honestly young dude I think you need to find a new hobby because this rap shit aint cutting it. Maybe you should try being a choir boy or maybe a sign spinner.
in other words
Your right, my critique of Wyoming was very bad, I haven't been there but a handful of times and didn't see anything but hillbilly truckers n truck stop whores.
Yet, my review of your music was on point and I stand behind my opinion of that vocal distortion you called rapping. Your buddies might be black but you are clearly a square white dude trying to be a rapper.
I would suggest getting a hold of a good anti-depressant, maybe seek some counseling, say a couple hundred thousand hail mary's and stop attempting to make words rhyme together while maintaining harmony with an instrumental beat.
Thank you for your submission but the State of California hereby rejects your entry.
Thank you for attempting at impressing us but your failed worse than the Challenger.
We will thank you again when we read your suicide note and/or obituary.
Yet, my review of your music was on point and I stand behind my opinion of that vocal distortion you called rapping. Your buddies might be black but you are clearly a square white dude trying to be a rapper.
I would suggest getting a hold of a good anti-depressant, maybe seek some counseling, say a couple hundred thousand hail mary's and stop attempting to make words rhyme together while maintaining harmony with an instrumental beat.
Thank you for your submission but the State of California hereby rejects your entry.
Thank you for attempting at impressing us but your failed worse than the Challenger.
We will thank you again when we read your suicide note and/or obituary.
lol not according to the census,
ttp://www.idcide.com/lists/wy/on-population-african-american-percentage.htm
youre killing me manning!
ttp://www.idcide.com/lists/wy/on-population-african-american-percentage.htm
youre killing me manning!
Wyoming African American Percentage
African American Percentage in Largest Cities
Rank African American Percentage
1. Cheyenne 3%
2. Casper 1%
3. Laramie 1%
4. Gillette 0%
5. Rock Springs 1%
6. Sheridan 0%
7. Green River 0%
8. Evanston 0%
9. Riverton 0%
10. Cody 0%
It probably the huge South African,Kenyan and Haitian population that snuck into Wyoming on boats
African American Percentage in Largest Cities
Rank African American Percentage
1. Cheyenne 3%
2. Casper 1%
3. Laramie 1%
4. Gillette 0%
5. Rock Springs 1%
6. Sheridan 0%
7. Green River 0%
8. Evanston 0%
9. Riverton 0%
10. Cody 0%
It probably the huge South African,Kenyan and Haitian population that snuck into Wyoming on boats
whos better..supermanning/kc/lil bro, or jihads auburn binoculars (my boy and i)?:
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSgZlC_Ymo
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSgZlC_Ymg
ps-no need to comment on how horrible we are...just whos better. if you wanna comment how amazing we are feel free to do that too
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSgZlC_Ymo
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSgZlC_Ymg
ps-no need to comment on how horrible we are...just whos better. if you wanna comment how amazing we are feel free to do that too
After listening to your tracks, you blow this cat out the water, but im not feelin it.
You lost me at "knock all the pixie dust out of my hand"
WTF...lilo and stitch...?
oh i get it, you guys are some comics
even with your joke raps your still better than dude, at least i laughed at yours, his was just sad
^^^
i take it that means you liked us better. thanks brah
@supermanning...you wanna help my boy and i boost our career and have a beef with us? we figured a good way to make a name for ourselves is to have a beef with someone, but havent found anyone we could potentially beat. i think you and your buddies are just the right level of competition for us.....yay or nay???
i take it that means you liked us better. thanks brah
@supermanning...you wanna help my boy and i boost our career and have a beef with us? we figured a good way to make a name for ourselves is to have a beef with someone, but havent found anyone we could potentially beat. i think you and your buddies are just the right level of competition for us.....yay or nay???
