Super Saiyans Of Rap

[Gordon Gekko]

I figured I'll post something since I havent in a while. I wanted to go with a dragon ball-Z theme on this cover because of the title, but they wanted something dark.

 

[tosin]

too much text...

 

[Gordon Gekko]

^I agree. I caught hell trying to fit all of that text on just the front, lol. They had even more on the back and about 30 logos.

 

[numba2stunna]

I hate it when the client wants a ton of text on a cover with one panel or just the tray....

Cover is clean.

 

[Toro]

I think the "The" and "Super" should look more like the "Saiyan". And like they said too much text, what can you do tho. Also what's so Dragon Ball about it?

 

[underground]

waaaaaaay too much goin on for me... like everybody else said, too much text. plus, it reads "The Super Of Rap Saiyans"

 

[prodigy91]

waaaaaaay too much goin on for me... like everybody else said, too much text. plus, it reads "The Super Of Rap Saiyans"

AGREE

 

[E.MAN]

Too much of everything. Really hard to focus on anything in the design

 

[Gordon Gekko]

I think the "The" and "Super" should look more like the "Saiyan". And like they said too much text, what can you do tho. Also what's so Dragon Ball about it?

I said that I wanted to use a dragon ball theme, but they wanted more of a dark feel instead of dragon ball.

 

[Toro]

I said that I wanted to use a dragon ball theme, but they wanted more of a dark feel instead of dragon ball.

Oh, sorry read it wrong.

 

[LeBigBang]

It's confused, too much text...

 

[tosin]

I figured I'll post something since I havent in a while. I wanted to go with a dragon ball-Z theme on this cover because of the title, but they wanted something dark.

was this the 1st one you posted? this is whats on dat piff...

 

[Toro]

That looks like a completely different designer, hope Cutthroat got payed for his.

 

[lil_wattage]

was this the 1st one you posted? this is whats on dat piff...

Yea..... looks like a different design..........

 

[qwasian]

I think both designs effects are way overdone.......sometimes effects being used is done a little too much to the point it starts to get busy and look bad.....

 

[KirbyDaAlmighty]

The only thing that looks better on the second one, is that there isn't as much text spread around everywhere.

 

[prodigy91]

NOT FEELIN THE SECOND ONE EITHER

 

[KirbyDaAlmighty]

I mean, I see what was trying to get done.
But it didn't happen.
It looks too un-professional, for some reason.

 

[Gordon Gekko]

was this the 1st one you posted? this is whats on dat piff...

Me producing that bullshit? No sirrrrrrr!
I got paid my 200 upfront for it, so I dont care which one they use.

 

[tosin]

i didnt mean to offend...i just saw another cover w/ the same title and posted it...and until i found the thread i didnt know it was the same group...