sum rhymin

[Greg Double]

i went from nickle and dimin, to gettin ill while im rhymin/
cuz lifes a hill and im climbin/ im like a diamond, worth a mill and
im shinin/ a suprise to your eyes cuz its blindin/ i dont wanna b
your idol fuck a simon/ im breakin thru yo linemen, and fuckin you
like a hymen/ with expert timin/

 

[Chaos]

its alright.... your lines need some more to them... metaphores might help, dont need a lot just a few should do...stay up homie

 

[dissciple211]

yea dog just keep spittin and improvin, keep expandin vocabulary and metaphorically, do ur thing.1

 

[Greg Double]

thanks yall

that was just some shit i dropped at work.. but good lookin out

yo im the boss in the office, call me the lyrical collossus/
droppin hot so be causious when im on the block hoppin topless/
give it all i got when im talkin could give a fuck if you mockin/
cuz im on top and its poppin just like a lock when im stalkin/
you hear me knockin aint no stoppin from east boston to compton/ my shyt is poppin like a collar when my niggas is flockin/
i see you gawkin cuz im ballin like an active hersey hawkins/

aight im outro..

 

[Suspect]

cool shit man i know you wrote this shit quick so i know you could of came sicker but not bad i'll talk to you later G....hit me up