Lynch you suck! No, that was tight. I always wanted to be able to do a rap song with the Rock music kind of playing and not interfering with the rapping. I like how brief your verse was, and how the producer let the Rock music add to the mood of the story. The convo with the female (Zagg?) also made it deeper. Good stuff, out of the box thinking!
PS: Oh yea, I like the DVD. I wish there was a freestyle in there though. I would urge Siccmade to release a DVD with footage of its artists recording in the studio along with everyday life type of footage. You know, writing lyrics, dealing with artists, etc. It's really the best promo you can have for any future album out of Siccmade because we live in the "reality shows" age right now and Siccmade has such a strong artist-2-fan relationship. Also, hire Loki and I and pay us loads of money to take care of your marketing/advertising, haha just kidding.