Stressed out - Please critique

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NOSTRIL KING

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I write songs maybe, that'll bring my life to an end/
if I'm reincarnated, then Ima write em again /
I eat unhealthy things like recipes /
with red meat, ephedra, amphetimines /
take off seat belts and speed, the only help for me/
is to help me bleed, I used to love everybody/
I wanted to help people, bums, junkies /
hustlers living lethally evil to leave it and play their hands dealt legal /
but only faggots care /
I switched, at my funeral I want basket cases and gangstas there/
auburn or all blue/
i talk to myself cuz I got no one to talk to/
"Dude don't spaz out" but I don't listen to college kids/
liquor sippin, cuz I didn't have a frat house on my parents tuition /
sometimes I'm havin these crazy thoughts like what if slashed my wrist, cuzz /
but that'd be cheating like the average bitch does, I'm stressin