Spitz verses..

[Spitz]

Iight heres another 28 or so bars. 90 people will stream and none will drop feedback for. hahahhaha you lazy bastards

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/redspitzmusic.htm

 

[Lil Rebel]

This is a cool track but the echo or your double, which ever it was, wasn't really needed but other than that the shit was on point. I was feeling it.

 

[Spitz]

yeah thats my terrible attempt at produceing. scence i have no budjet at all. i learn as i go.

 

[jay deuce]

I told you.

 

[BIGCHILL]

yeah thats my terrible attempt at produceing. scence i have no budjet at all. i learn as i go.




at least your honest.but why would you start workin on a album if you have no budjet and cant make beats?

 

[jay deuce]

Well, he really just started rappin, its more of a hobby. He ain't out to blow up just yet. Once spring rolls around and our other business gets going we are gonna start savin up loot for a studio and try to make an album a reality. Spitz is basically just makin tracks and gaining experience as he goes. It can't hurt right?

Chill did you listen? What do you think of the lyrics and delivery?

 

[BIGCHILL]

lyrics and delivery was good, just need to touch it up lil bit. its like drivin a car and the trainy skips once in a wile. i was bobbin my head and it was some parts that kind of thru me off.but if your just startin to rap and this is what you love to do,try to the the most creative rapper you can be.dont follow no one, do you.

 

[jay deuce]

I feel you about the skippin, thats somethin that with experience and repetition corrects. You can only get better right?

 

[BIGCHILL]

4 SHO

 

[mouthpiece]

Delivery, I think you should work on it to me that's real important.
Lyrics, every artist could always improve. I'm an artist and a producer so I believe in constructive critism it ain't hard to tell someone there weak.HATERS DO THAT! stay up an attit