Something

[All Out HOGG]

This is for angels without hope...I hate the day i let you go...I know it hurts you, cause it hurts me too...Don't hate you, but hate the things you do...I'll admit it, we all make mistakes...& the bitter taiste is that love infatuates...How can i forget you & everything that happened...When you helped me escape the world im trapped-in...So this is life -Mine seems Fucked...Even if it aint right, still im stuck...& my reality stays in desperation for closure...Thinkin to myself, i should'a held you closer...I couldn't put it in words, but sealed it in'a letter...If we were meant, I guess we'd still be together...Im faded, i just hope you remember me...SMuRF signing off, ****** I LOVE You etrenaly...

 

[All Out HOGG]

Guess im just wack

 

[CHRISHOGGALYPSE]

you and i have our obvious differences......but this was the best i've seen you write, but you're still a rata

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

you write poems, not flows.

 

[All Out HOGG]

^^^You muble lyrics you don't rap

 

[Greg Double]

LOL

 

[V i L E]

Its OK, you just need to organize how you write it.
single bar
single bar //
single bar
single bar//

That's what we're used to reading.

 

[All Out HOGG]

^^^I'll never take advice from someone who has 50 cent in his sig & im not gonna change the way i write...there used to reading my bars the way they are

 

[x-kalibur]

this was a nice peice, good to see your posting again smurf

 

[V i L E]

^^^I'll never take advice from someone who has 50 cent in his sig & im not gonna change the way i write...there used to reading my bars the way they are

If you look close enough to the titles of those tracks, you'd see that it's not a real CD. It's actually a diss to 50 Cent. What's the attitude for man? I'm only giving the same advice everyone else was.

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

^^^You muble lyrics you don't rap

and you dont even do as much as muble lyrics, you dont make an attempt at all cuz your shit is weak as fuck. dont you have HIV or sumthing? go hybernate and die you waste of earth's space.

 

[V i L E]

... I know he ain't all that tight, but that was just plain mean. I can't wait to showcase my audio.

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

we show no remorse to internet-pimping levas like this little piece of shit. he's busting R Kelly's trying to pimp young hoes on AIM with his HIV infested ass. if you thought that wuz mean you'd think i wuz the devil if you witnessed me and this waste of human tissue meet in person.

you know wut.... on second thought, i take that back. i aint tryna contract no fatal virus from this wannabe sewer rat. go get trained by your faggot ass homies and give them all your diseases so you can all die off slowly. the world will be a better place. fuckin leva.

 

[All Out HOGG]

Vile...Fatal is my number 1 fan...he been so for years

 

[Law]

A great piece of writing no matter what you call the format, real sincere.. I'm feeling, however, I have seen you come a lot harder... So the piece is above average, I just know what your capeable of.. And its a short piece...

Much love bro...
Law

 

[m.w.merlino]

flowetry in prose