something a lil different

[CHRISHOGGALYPSE]

let me know what you think of this here, just some cool out shit, no curses in it, dropped some meatphors and similies in there, let me know. i wrote it to lil flips everday song. let me know what you like or don't like about it

IS MY LIFE WORTH LIVING?
I NEED A SECOND LOOK,
I NEED A GRIP OF MOTIVATION,
FROM MY FAVORITE BOOK/
NO PAWN OR ROOK,
CAN CROOK MY LIFE FROM THIS GAME,
ONLY KING JESUS CHRIST
CAN MAKE MY SOUL RE-LOCATE/

I'M TRYNA SHAKE,
THE ONE'S WHO HATE,
AND WANNA BREAK MY NECK,
LIKE A CORVETTE BEHIND A CAR WRECK/
I GET RESPECT,
BUT PROTECT AND SERVE IS A JOKE,
AND THESE BABY PITTS WITH NO STRIPES,
OUT HERE GUNNIN FOR MY THROAT/

I ROLL ALONE,
BUT BLUE TONES OF CLOTHES
IS QUICK TO SHOW,
IT AIN'T ALL GOOD
AND THEY PACKIN HEAT LIKE A CAR HOOD/
THE SHOOTING STARTED,
MY SOUL HAS PARTED FROM MY SKIN,
I PRAY TO WIN,
LORD PLEASE LET MY HEART BEAT AGAIN!/

MY GUARDIAN,
HAS PARDONED SIN,
I START TO GRIN,
WHEN MY BULLET MARKS ARE GONE,
IT'S ALL DARK AGAIN/
I GUESS I LOVE MY LIFE,
I GOT MY SECOND LOOK SO IT SEEMS,
BUT I GOT MY FIRST LOOK AT DEATH,
IT HAPPENED ALL IN MY DREAMS, YOU FOLLOW ME?


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[King Dubb]

cool mayne, its str8

stay about yo marbles

 

[All Out HOGG]

don't be suprised if your critisized, most mufuckas don't like shit that aint about killing 100 people a day...

& don't pay attention to King Dumbshit he compliments everything no matter what

 

[JaE RiZZo..]

diz str8,^^he's right,but ne way,rhymes r kinda simple,it waz different,but not very hott,but iz coo...................

 

[King Dubb]

EL OH EL

i smell estrogen comin from the SLuMz

 

[All Out HOGG]

I smell cum from your lips

 

[Suspect]

good shit i think it would make a good audio...stay up 1