SOME SHIT ON THE REAL..

[x-kalibur]

Just a little something I did..



Broads n' mind games sorta blend into the characteristic, nothing seems to be realistic.. Simplistic so why don't she understand?//
Things ain't goin as planned, Take-my-hand n' listen to me for once-in-ya-life-time//
Fuck this rhyme, It's time you hear me-out//
I ain't gonna pout, Cause what I'm bout to say-may-not be what you want to hear//
But on the real I could give a fuck less, Time and time again I've been sincere//
It appears-I'm not bein clear enfough for you to hear, Nothings goin our way so stop pushing me!//
I've had it up there here with your bullshit even my homies agree, Just let me be its plain to see//
Things just ain't the same, No need-to point fingers were both to blame for letting it get this deep//
Talk is cheap, Me and you are done n' its all off my chest.. I can go on with my life//
No more strife.. Everythings cool now, I've got my pride//
Tryed n' tryed again but I was denied.. Fuck it tho' set it all aside//
I'm done..!//

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

well said fuck a bitch... you could of set ya bars up with the rhyme scheme for the reading dumbfucks on here. :classic:


started off coo' then fell at the end....

 

[x-kalibur]

yeah it did fall.. BUT it was to make a point..

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

it did

 

[x-kalibur]

coo thanks for the feedback biggz.. atleast when you peep the fuckin thread u post somethin..

 

[Chaos]

Not bad, but not great...you have had better shit...keep it up though X

 

[SkARfAcE x925]

It's coo homie.. i can relate.. some of your shit before was cleaner but this made perfect sense.. i was feelin it... stay up X... pz

 

[RaginHomosexual]

Just a little something I did..



Broads n' mind games sorta blend into the characteristic, nothing seems to be realistic.. Simplistic so why don't she understand?//
Things ain't goin as planned, Take-my-hand n' listen to me for once-in-ya-life-time//
Fuck this rhyme, It's time you hear me-out//
I ain't gonna pout, Cause what I'm bout to say-may-not be what you want to hear//
But on the real I could give a fuck less, Time and time again I've been sincere//
It appears-I'm not bein clear enfough for you to hear, Nothings goin our way so stop pushing me!//
I've had it up there here with your bullshit even my homies agree, Just let me be its plain to see//
Things just ain't the same, No need-to point fingers were both to blame for letting it get this deep//
Talk is cheap, Me and you are done n' its all off my chest.. I can go on with my life//
No more strife.. Everythings cool now, I've got my pride//
Tryed n' tryed again but I was denied.. Fuck it tho' set it all aside//
I'm done..!//

ha is this about the whore who fucked your cousin

 

[x-kalibur]

no actually you flaming faggot hiv positive ass square.. dumbass homo.. as you can see no one likes you..